Universe

Universe

A Poem by Sarah_Allen

If not you, who will remember my dreams-? 
When I lay in lifeless December streams,  
Eyes closed in slumber, tell me what does life mean? 
There has to be more than the universe deems!  

Come lay with me on the frost-kissed ground- 
A night world broken; sadly crying in sound,
 Can you hear them whisper in the air all around? 
Like faded faces who longed to be found-  

Someday we'll burn off like the stars- 
Those we long to be close are getting too far- 
Will we keep viewing life as a bursting quasar-? 
Feeding on energy until it tears us apart? 

 Will the Universe keep going; keep moving on-? 
When death comes for me- will I truly be gone?

© 2019 Sarah_Allen


Author's Note

Sarah_Allen
Life after death- hm.

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this is really awesome! i love it!

Posted 1 Hour Ago


i like this because i often wonder what there is after this life...what exactly is there?
will we be remembered, forgotten? is there something spiritual afterward or do we just lie in the ground and rot until we are just bones?
at least we hope our poetry might be that star that still shines from the heavens even if we don't.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen

1 Month Ago

thank you Jacob! yeah! I often wonder too, and sometimes i see death as this black void we never ret.. read more
This is not just a gem among pebbles, this is a cry for help that is so beautifully put.....and one such cry I've made so much my voice is hoarse. Stanza 1 Line 3 would still flow smoothly if you take out the "does" and tag an "s" onto "mean" to better the rhyme progression. But, Sarah, this is beautiful, and if only the universe could answer the cries of the shadows. Lord knows we need to be found. Well done!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen

1 Month Ago

thank you for your suggestion! i do wish the universe would answer our cries, im one who needs to kn.. read more
emipoemi

1 Month Ago

I've been wallowing in this hole for 17 years.....I'm def ready for the light.
Just think of one,, we will find out. Very well written and well expressed

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen

1 Month Ago

THank you Kesch :D
We shall find out one day. Maybe a better place for us dear Sarah. I liked the questions asked in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen

1 Month Ago

May it be a better place, yes. I hope so. I cant wait until i know the answers... Thank you for your.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome dear Sarah.

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Added on September 18, 2019
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Sarah_Allen

Κύριε, Κύριε, το αίμα σου Bρίσκεται στα χέρια μοu



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