A kiss of Paradise

A kiss of Paradise

A Poem by Sashalee

I want to go somewhere
Where the butterfly's roam free
There is no fear and only tears of joy
My hair can soak the sun rays
The children can run and play
I don't want to be sad anymore,
I don't want to cry anymore 
I want to go somewhere
Where the wind blows my hair
Where there is fruit on every tree,
The ground full of flowers 
I want to go to paradise..

© 2011 Sashalee


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beutiful...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't we all dream of such a place! this is really beautiful keep up the great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful description of heaven and its happiness.
The determination to reach paradise of joy was very intense in your write.
Like always, It held my heart.
Great Job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good Job, short but kept me reading. I don''t know where paradise is but you have wanting to go.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like to think of paradise as the journey, and not the destination. That's just me, though. Nice read, by the way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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makes you wonder, is heaven really a place on earth? or is it something thats just there..in our hearts maybe, I like the way you paint the picture:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Me too :) Loved this poem! So carefree..
Great write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sashalee
Sashalee

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My name is Sasha and I am 18 years old. I love to draw and im a huge game freak; I write short stories and poems on my free time :) more..

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