Black Box

Black Box

A Poem by Savannah Bly
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Death leaves a trail

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Black Box                               


Pitch black

Open- revealing what’s inside

Whenever it comes

A town gathers

 

I look inside

As does everyone

At least once

To gaze upon the great power

 

Some without fear

Touch it

I can’t

I hate the power

 

It is too big

It takes too much

It always comes

At the worst time

 

Why?

How can such a small box

Hold such a big power

That haunts?

 

The town resides it

Where they always do

Whenever it comes,

In a field of flowers and stone

© 2014 Savannah Bly


Author's Note

Savannah Bly
This poem was published in my College Literary magazine, "The Quill," in the spring 2013 issue.

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Oh, I see. Interesting use of the verb resides.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very well written. Lots of feeling and thoughts of death packed into such a short poem. Is the first line of the last verse correct? Resides?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

10 Years Ago

Thank you, and yes it is correct. resides: to dwell permanently or for a considerable time.

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Added on February 5, 2014
Last Updated on May 10, 2014
Tags: death, funeral, sadness, loss, hate, anger, buried, dead, casket, cemetary, stone, flowers, depression, feelings, emotions, family, friends, box, black, destroyed, cold, life, spirit, cloudy days

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Savannah Bly
Savannah Bly

Wichita, KS



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Hi, my name is Savannah. I am originally from the West Coast but live in Kansas now. I love to write and I love to read; one of my current majors is Creative Writing. I have a blog I am restarting soo.. more..

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