Escape Your Dreamed Nightmare

Escape Your Dreamed Nightmare

A Poem by Savannah Bly
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Dreams aren't always good.

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Escape Your Dreamed Nightmare

 

A dream is what you hope

A delusion of what you feel

It is a place to cope

And where your secrets are sealed

 

When you’re in a dream

Everything’s so real

Things that aren't what they seem

And all the emotions you feel

 

You don’t want to wake

And leave this world of good

But staying is a bad mistake

Don’t get caught where you once stood

 

It is time to live reality

This nightmare you have to leave

Never was fantasy, don't you see?

Your dreams can be deceived

 

© 2014 Savannah Bly


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It is time to live reality
This nightmare you have to leave
Never was fantasy, don't you see?
Your dreams can be deceived

I have no words to what I witness in your writing you truly are blessed and gifted writer my friend, keep writing and you will have millions of fans like me:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad you liked it! Have you read "The Ocean's Night Song"? It is of similar context a.. read more
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome and send me RR
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I smiled after reading the poem..the reality..aah! Fantastic work ! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Hope

10 Years Ago

you are welcome ! :D
This was beautiful and so very true. These dreams we look for don't always turn out to be what we would expect...well maybe sometimes, but all too often they become nightmares in broad daylight.

Very nicely penned. This was an exceptional piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it and found an understanding of meaning to it! Thank you.
It is time to live reality
This nightmare you have to leave
Never was fantasy, don't you see?
Your dreams can be deceived

I have no words to what I witness in your writing you truly are blessed and gifted writer my friend, keep writing and you will have millions of fans like me:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad you liked it! Have you read "The Ocean's Night Song"? It is of similar context a.. read more
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome and send me RR
This comment has been deleted by the poster.

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Added on March 13, 2014
Last Updated on May 8, 2014
Tags: dreams, reality, deceived, world, mistakes, sadness, emotions, life, relationships, family, future, past, present, asleep, imagination, creation, awake, hope, cope, feelings thoughts, secrets, safe

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Savannah Bly
Savannah Bly

Wichita, KS



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Hi, my name is Savannah. I am originally from the West Coast but live in Kansas now. I love to write and I love to read; one of my current majors is Creative Writing. I have a blog I am restarting soo.. more..

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