Empty

I have this empty feeling inside

It's like the world is crashing down

On me and I have no say

In anything at all

I hate that dreadful

Feeling. I wish I could

Destroy it, but I can't. I can't wait

Until this is all over

And then I can finally be free.

 

Author's Note

Nonnet (I think).

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

this is very good writing. I love it. ^_^

[Jennifer Neuman]

I love the way each sentence continues and isn't just one line. The theme is well delivered. overall very good:)
but what is a nonnet?

[deeps]

I like this, i think is it lovely and well written

[R E Tree]

Do you mean sonnet because I don't know what a nonnet is. Perhaps it means the same thing as a sonnet. But I do say this would make a remarkable sonnet and I love the blue font it suits the poem nicely. The blue reminds me of tears of feeling empty.

[Rachel 6sixtrümper]

i love this Kristen! Its beautiful how you incorporated all parts of a single feeling!