Something about that emo kid

Day 1

 

Dear make-up-wearing-emo-kid,
I hope you're having fun. I hope your life is good.
I wish you well, but I'm curious, do you wish the
same for me? I mean, you don't even talk to me
anymore. When you do talk to me, it's to question
me about my sexuality, what clothing I'm wearing
at the moment, basically anything relating to sex.
So, it's hard to tell you apart from those perverted
old creeps you might see on TV, looking up the
skirts of MILF's as they stroll on by.

Day 2

Dear skinny-confused-emo-kid,
It's not about looks. It's about what's inside.
It's not about sex, it's about the love in a relationship.
It's not about having to lie to me and make me feel
like you love me, because there are millions of girls out there.
I'm not the only one to chase. I'm sure there are lots of other
girls who would just love to let you chase their skirts and
hear you lie to them repeatedly. I'm just sick of it all.
I don't need you, and you sure as hell don't need me.

Day 3

Dear traitor,
You built me up,
you broke me down.
You got what you wanted.
I hope you're happy.
Wipe the smirk off your face,
I don't care that you've succeeded in making me fall for you
I don't care that you're freaking gorgeous.
I don't care.
I am not your toy.
I am not your slave.
And I am most definitely not your 'baby girl'.
Just because you have my heart doesn't mean that you can control me.
I'm not yours.
I'm my own person.
I'm me.

And there is absolutely nothing you can do about it.

But never mind that now, I must go. Mother is calling me to come to supper. Until next time, you traitor.

Sincerely,
A-broken-hearted-clown.

Author's Note

Prose. Written from actual experience.

Reviews

[BeanHead:)]

*applaud*
so much emotion and it was raw and honest!!
i love how you structured your poem with 3 major stanzas and all three had a different time slot in your poem. a beggining, a middle and an end. also the diary thing is also quite a good idea because its not your normal everyday poem. its a bit more unique and diffferent from the rest.

[Rose Tyler]

Day 3
Dear traitor,
You built me up,
you broke me down.
You got what you wanted.
I hope you're happy.

My favorite lines here! I've known how this feels, to be broken by someone who has completely enraptured you and stolen your heart. Even after that your heart still belongs to them. This was well done, I loved it !!

[Alex Thomas]

I can see why this won an award. Very raw and powerful. The story within is very well too. Congratulations on this excellent piece.

[Rachel 6sixtrümper]

Is it wrong of me to say i found some humor in this poem? just at the emo kid part in the beginning. As the poem progresses then the mood changes and becomes so raw and powerful. i loved it

[deeps]

Dear skinny-confused-emo-kid,
It's not about looks. It's about what's inside.
It's not about sex, it's about the love in a relationship.
It's not about having to lie to me and make me feel
like you love me, because there are millions of girls out there.

Simply amazing, and clapping here.
I loved these lines here. This is amazing!

[Bridget Mcmaken]

WOW this is just awesome! It has a very nice story to it, you have writen this very well! I love this poem, this is just wow. Great work!

[R E Tree]

This conflict was written so perfectly. Your got your point across so perfectly and shuts up the traitor and makes them a fool. No other traitor will wanna do this to you again. That emo boy sure got what he deserved. This poem is about revenge and making people regret treating you in such disgrace. I liked this one. It was a pleasure to read.

[The Chocoholic]

I liked the first two stanzas very much. It WAS indeed very honest

[Lightfalls]

Wow, I liked this, it's a great write. Interesting, unique, and different!