4) Vixen

This is a poem about a girl.

I fell for it
I'm not scared to admit it
But what leaves me uneasy
Is how you didn't

We were close
At least I thought so
I sacrificed, tried my best
Yet you still left me so low

I sometimes wish you knew it
What could have been yours
But you used me
Left me cold on the floor

I've moved on
Passed you by
You leech of love
You left me dry

Author's Note

I'd greatly enjoy feedback :)

Reviews

[Kayla-Vi Hopkins]

I love this! Very relatable and kept it simple. Sometime's keeping a writing piece simple instead of over complicating it to show your vocabulary is more brilliant and enjoyable. Bravo!

[Marshall Schoth]

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you can get exactly the feeling I wanted to evoke :)