Hopefully I Never Wake .

Hopefully I Never Wake .

A Poem by AchingAlexandra

I can't help the pain in my chest , so I'm writing about it .

I feel my eyes darken ,
from the pain in my heart,
the pain in my chest,
the pain in my soul .

You pushed me away ,
when I was trying to comfort you ,
I really just want you to be mine ,
and never leave my side .

Is that too much to ask ?
After I've tried so hard ,
to help heal you ,
after I've shown you so much ,
of my sacred affection ?

I want to help you ,
you want me gone ,
you say you don't want to ruin me,
But I'm already ruined .

There's nothing more I can do ,
so I'll just go back to my room ,
and show my pillow more tears,
but these ones will be crimson ,
and hopefully I'll never wake .

© 2012 AchingAlexandra

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From the start, I knew this was going to be a depressing poem. Its well written and flows from the start-which are goood qualities-but.. there is a big difference between writing ridiculously drepssing poems, and writing what is running through your mind. I know 100% where you're coming from- but being depressed, writing depressingly, and thinking depressing thoughts gets you nowhere.

Posted 12 Years Ago

i think every person has felt this in their life at least once.and this is a beautiful way to show it..very good

Posted 12 Years Ago

The first line of any body of writing is what lures the reader in, and you did that so marvellously, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

great poetry wonderful work thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sad words, beautifully penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on March 18, 2012
Last Updated on March 18, 2012




I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..


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