Rip Current

A Poem by BodilessSoul

Hazah. A poem in the shape of a wave. Awesome, no?

© 2009 BodilessSoul

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ooooooh! Creative! I love the layout. Keeps it interesting and the eyes playfully running along.... or if i may... being pulled along by the current! This feeling is a strong one and I believe you are strong enough to overcome it. I didn't think I was when something similar happened to me but voila I am still here.

Eat lifesavers! The gummie ones...They might make you smile!

~Raindropoflife

Posted 14 Years Ago

Night Walker

Here's my constructive criticism: Well done, with many good descriptive words and imagery. The only thing I noticed was that you could change 'become the reaper of all I sew' to 'become the reaper of all I have sown'. Other than that I think it was a well written concrete poem. Write some more! :P

Posted 14 Years Ago

OutToLunch

THAT IS SOOOOO COOL!!!! SOOOOO COOOOOOL!!! L! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EdenEve

This is great i hope to see more of the similar writing

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 12, 2009
Last Updated on June 12, 2009

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BodilessSoul

LarlarLand, FL

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Hello All! I am an aspired writer but I don't think I'm that great. I have many ideas but I have a lot to learn about techniques and all that jazz! I love literature and also acting. I love theatr.. more..