"Sleeping soundly I was when sunshine of morn awakened me, and turned my dreams and creative visions into those to be put to verse.....truly, they fell through sky filled with clouds of color - my ideas, and were swallowed hot, thus prompting my dreams to become reality"
......my intake of your words expressed with beauty and zest!
It's pretty darn good. the last three lines do the trick-- there's profundity in those ideas and scope for interpretations..not quite sure why you used haiku though..
i'm not following this all that well, not because i think anything was wrong with it, i just honestly thing the idea behind this is above me right now haha
maybe it's just not a morning read, who knows. but it's beautiful none the less, i got a really nice feeling from this.
i'll take a stab anyways, am i close in saying this is about being woken up from dreaming by your partner talking in their sleep?
cheers
I'm no poet, but I understand how when the writing bug bites, well, you've got to start writing it down. It doesn't seem to matter whether it's prose or poetry. Like the other reviewers, I love the imagery you've created in this, and imagined sunbeams piercing the clouds to touch down on the poet.
I'm hoping WC is about real connections between writers.
Expanding one's readership is a big part of being a writer, but it's less important
than an active role with the right group of people. (.. more..