Spellbound

Spellbound

A Poem by SheActsLikeSummer
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Enchanted by the moonlit waters...

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Enchanted by the moonlit waters,
Entranced by the fiery blaze,
She captivates you,
Shrouded by a purple haze
Charmed by the harmonious rhythm,
Mesmerized by the ringing chime,
She captivates you,
Chanting, It's your time
Allured by the shimmering reflection,
Seduced by the graceful breeze,
She captivates you,
Hands you the keys
Enthralled by a shadowy figure,
Fascinated by the dark silhouette,
She captivates you,
Whispering her last threat
Spellbound

© 2012 SheActsLikeSummer


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She captivates you ,
Hands you the key.
A nice write.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Ooooh, I love it, it captured me like a siren! This was dark and delighfully wicked and enjoyable to read. Spellbound I was. Great work, friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! Great writing I've like your writing and the way you strung your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is beautiful and mysterious! i enjoy this so much. i do feel that last line of the third stanza interrupts the otherwise meticulous meter and rhythm of the piece. overall, incredible!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful. I love the repetition of "she captivates you." Clever. For flow purposes you might consider starting the last line of all the stanzas with "ing" on the end. So you use the four words: shrouded, chanting, hands and whispering. So maybe change shrouded to "shrouding you in purple haze." And then instead of "hands" say "handing you the keys." Just some thoughts. Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh my gosh, this is amazing. it flows very well and i love the discriptive words to portray a beautiful, mysterious girl. i love it, great work :)
-Mariah

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was also quite unique. You had very subtle imagery which which worked well with the brevity of it. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well I was gonna comment how spellbinding this was but I thought that might be cheating :-)
Great flow to this. uhm, what's the word? A word that I forget that means smooth and graceful, like elegant, but not elegant. I'll go shut up now :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it, your great(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


I just didn't enjoy it, I got enchanted by the spell that I am now bound from this beautiful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2012
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SheActsLikeSummer
SheActsLikeSummer

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I wish there was a single moment in my life that summed up who I am. Just a short snippet of time that I could copy and paste here so I didn't have to rack my mind for something to say. But I kind of .. more..

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