Anonymous existence

A 17 year old confused, shes been abuse... by her friends and those who say they love her. But do they? Shes unsure if anythings good anymore...

Smoking, teasing, stealing, sneezing.
 Peer pressure when i'm on a down low, everything but a hoe. You know... Breezy on the horizon of this mad land, its no bad land. But in my hand, I see a life wasting, its being pulled down the sink or strangled in an alleyway. Its being taken for granted, when everyone else is in the sky. They're high. Every second shes on guard, but every other minute shes got it hard. A smack in the leg, or a slap on her cheek. Shes ashamed of what her life will now be.
        Drinking, running, sleeping, humming.
Nothing precious but a guy she once knew, hes changed now... and never sees her like he used too, maybe it was her. And her friends told her "No!" Or  maybe she just grew up to be a hoe. Like the rest of them are. But its not like that, she tells herself. Its them and not me, i'm never gonna be like I used to be every other week. When I got high and dreamed of a better place to fly. But in this world, I'd prefer to be me than to pretend to be someone within a dream within a dream.

Author's Note

Sorry for repetition of the word hoe, mhm i think i was in a state when i wrote this. aha, hope you can relate to it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"But in this world, I'd prefer to be me than to pretend to be someone within a dream within a dream."
Better to be real and seek real dreams. Can't allow the world to control your journey. I like your thoughts and the strong ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Liderien]

this is good.

[Kaya]

This is really well written. I fully enjoyed reading it. I really related to her character. Its so easy a trap to fall in. Good job.

[Distant horizons]

Love the last line of this. It just expresses everything required. Wonderful write.