Gray Named

Black feathers... White shame...

She has a name written in gray letters

black feathers adorn white shame

rage shudders flutters closed

lover ages

beauty a phage

pages turn 

blunders burn

she never decays

a black and white temptress at a midnight soiree

dips the potion in whimsical purrs

feel the stir growing

dark-hearted mistress slurring words 

looking blurred an image folds inward

night boldly creeps beneath wards laced

mirth seething

breathing toxic fumes 

flogged and ripped schemes of survival

sulfurous babble rattles the cage

bile and wonder cease to amaze

raze the vile demon

like cattle we are to her

shine the earth with black blood 

white names of infamy have we in heaven this day 

Reviews

[Kesha]

I absolutely loved this piece, especially these lines
"raze the vile demon
like cattle we are to her
shine the earth with black blood "

Like cattle we are, it seems as though this could be a reference to the modern day America lol. Either way, a wonderful write with vivid imagery, & thought provoking.

[Chase Dylan]

I absolutely love the fact you love this piece, Kesha. You more than welcome to open-end interpretation... That is always the most fun! Heh... I love those lines as well...

[Kesha]

I agree, I've always said that a poem is different to each reader, as it depends on their mood & where they are in life, it can mean something different to the writer & then something else entirely to each reader. Haha. Yes, those were my favorite.

[Chase Dylan]

We share similar views on that, then, Mrs. K... Each individual is so different, what one person sees as red, another sees as blue, etc...

[Kesha]

Yes exactly my point!

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Mr.Writer]

"pages turn
blunders burn
she never decays"
#BestLine2017
Lol this poem made me wonder where we can find this temptress?
It was an amazing poem, very well described!!
The words flew well and engaged me until the end :)

[Chase Dylan]

You flatter me heavily, thanks so much, Mr. W... I would assume you would find her in a cozy spot somewhere in the 6th layer...

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! In the 6th layer... hmm...
I'll try to find it :P

[Chase Dylan]

Haha... Good luck... Far to much fire for me...

[Mr.Writer]

Fire... ohh yeah, fire...
"breathing toxic fumes "
Umm... I'll check another day probably :P

[Chase Dylan]

Maybe take a warlock, succubus can be quite scary...

[Chase Dylan]

Succubi*? I do not even know...

[Mr.Writer]

Umm... no thank you.. ;)
I'm all good ;)

[Chase Dylan]

Haha.... I thought so...

[tktk]

"sulfurous babble rattles the cage/
bile and wonder cease to amaze" this is an extremely sensory phrase and I savored every morsel of language in this poem! A true wordsmith.

[Chase Dylan]

You humble me with your most gracious compliments... I am glad you enjoyed...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the flow of this poem softens her a bit...but she is dangerous...needs to be taken with caution.

j.

[Chase Dylan]

That she does, J, thanks for readin'

[Zia Doyle]

This piece has a dark, velvet smoothness to it but not without its sharp, twisted moments I like in writing. I Like the imagery of "shine the earth with black blood" A narrative piece that is elaborate and evocative in its rendering. So good!

[Chase Dylan]

Your dark and velvety insight has left me glowing, thank you... I am glad you enjoyed it...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This has a touch of the mystical to it and an intrigue to get the readers attention to a flowing dark piece that leaves us expectant and seeking the answer.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you for the mystically intriguing words, yourself, John...

[DIVYA]

She sounds like one of those evil mistresses who lived in dark castles in the medieval ages who killed their slave girls for evening entertainment. Very interesting story. Thank you for sharing...

[Chase Dylan]

Welcome, and I like the sound of that... Wickedly delightful, and an interesting thought...

[DIVYA]

You are welcome :)))))

[Isabella Ivy]

I only like the beginning! lol. The last gets too brutal for me. You are clearly a great talent with the pen! I.I.

[Chase Dylan]

Haha, as long as you can find what you are looking for within the words... I am happy... I apologize for the brutality, sometimes my pen drifts bloody... Your lavish compliments mean the world to me. Thank you, dear reader...

[Isabella Ivy]

You're most welcome :)

[wordman]

touching write,we are like cattle to her,great line,enjoyed the journey

[Chase Dylan]

I am glad to hear you liked it, thanks for enjoying...