BAIRN

Relax!!

Look, god has amazed me 

He sent down an Angel

Where overloaded is what cuteness,

and innocence had already taken place.

On a pinkish face

tightening lips and moving eyes

reminds me of those sweetest pies

And of course, their huddled body

beneath which rumpled sheet lies.

AH! their odour enshrines

the lord's best of best fragrance

and truly it compels me to kiss

dusk till dawn, right on their face.

The giggles they make, pure and raw

unbeatable till it hurt their jaw

Trust me,

they can do cycling, lying on bed

and make juice out of a piece of bread 

But, when they cry

the universe cries

to dwell under such warmness, I can even die!

How lucky you, squishy cuties

no worries and no duties

free to release anywhere , your pees and potties!

I am your die hard fan

consider me in your crowded jam

can I just hug you, little lovebug

and place kisses, holding alike shrug!

Author's Note

HAVE FUN DEAREST ONES!!

Reviews

[Richard M]

A very nice and quaint little poem. A fair account of squiggyness! I'm not blessed, personally, to know this in my own life, but have witnessed many times through siblings' families and friends. Thank you for the Read Request. Take care my friend :)

[Sneh]

My pleasure and a big thank you!
It's great that you could cherish with them..:))

[Richard M]

That's so sweet Sneha, thank you!

[Sneh]

welcome ..... c:

[Shweta]

It's so beautiful... It brings out exactly all the effects and feelings of love and loveliness of a baby.. Though I loved the entire write and every word... This childlike humor,
'How lucky you, squishy cuties
no worries and no duties
free to release anywhere , your pees and potties!'... I found the cutest

Keep up love.. And keep writing

[Sneh]

Your kind words are meaning a lot to me Shwetz...Thank you so much!!! c:

[Onlyme]

What a delight sweet and loving poem of a cute baby. And how it has such a profound effect us dear humans. Who, adored them.

[Sneh]

thanks dawn, glad you liked it!

[Onlyme]

Keep writing sweetheart. Beautifully done.

[ca.shorty]

Very cute I love it keep writing!

[Sneh]

Thank you so much!

[casablancavic]

ahhh, the little mess makers....what would we do without them?

[Sneh]

Haha, true, no charm ... Thank you!! :)

[Rye]

This is such a wonderful write.

[Sneh]

Glad you liked it Ryanna. Thanks much!! :)

[barleygirl]

I am 62 & never had kids, so when I read poems about parenthood, I do not relate very much. Your poem, however, is quite different & original & interesting, becuz it shows a different side of parenting, with glimpses of having fun & feeling an ever-present longing for one's children. These are feelings I've never heard any parent describe this way & it really feels like you're letting me into your heart (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

Thank you for such warm words and appreciation, this really means a lot. c:

[Mrudula Rani]

This is absolutely lovely. Reads like a lullaby! Straight from a young mom's loving heart.
"... and truly it compels me to kiss dusk till dawn..." I understand those feelings. Even after they had grown up you still feel that way about your children.

[Sneh]

I'm just a teen, but to me, yes even watching babies bring a huge smile ....Thanks for the kind review!!
Stay blessed.. :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Hopefully in the future you will have your own babies and be thrilled and write amazing poems about them.

[Sneh]

,,,,, sure! :D

[Wild Rose]

From a doting mum

Blessed with a tender babe to love and care for
To teach and groom Until their teens

Then they take over
Their own life and yours

[Sneh]

That's very true..! Thank you for taking time . Always a pleasure to read your Words. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely Sneh. I like babies too. They are so delightful, cuddly and cute. These lines have put a huge smile on my face. We gave no babies in my home, only teenagers :)

Chris

[Sneh]

Thank you very much!!
I can see the smile, hopefully. :)

[Sneh]

and I wish babies could remain babies for ever...