"Will I Ever Be Enough"

"Will I Ever Be Enough"

A Chapter by SnuggleBunnyQueen

I wonder

Will I ever be enough?

Will I constantly

Be compared to someone

Someone in your past?

No I won’t.

I won’t let that happen.

You say I’m different than her;

I know that I’m different.

I won’t lose the man of my dreams;

The father to our daughter;

The love of my life;

The other half of me;

My soul mate

For always,

Forever,

For all eternity.



© 2012 SnuggleBunnyQueen


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*Will I Ever Be Enough?*

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Tex
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#2: Will I Be Enough?

I really like your style.

Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SnuggleBunnyQueen

8 Years Ago

Thank you again. I am glad that I have found someone that likes how I write. I was very nervous abou.. read more
Tex

8 Years Ago

i would suggest you post these each on there own, pick titles, and get them in some other rooms, you.. read more
SnuggleBunnyQueen

8 Years Ago

I am going to start doing that. Once I have titles for them all. Right now though I am trying to get.. read more
This is truly sad. I like how it ended abruptly leaving me wonder what will she do to obtain her soul mate? Perhaps there is nothing to do , but confess these feelings to win him back. *****

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SnuggleBunnyQueen

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. You have actually given me an idea for the next poem I write. I'll write t.. read more

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I am a working mother of one, also while going to college online. Writing has always been one of my passions though. I write free verse poetry and short stories. I would love to expand my horizons th.. more..

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