Her Stained Heart

Her fragile spine is resting against a wooden post, one material connected inside out.

Her narrow face is an empty expression of emotions.

Her chest rises and falls

Timely

Slowly

Deeply.

Twilight is making an introduction as the sky has replaced its nightgown with a silvery morning dress.

 

"The moon never stays in the sky pass its time."

 

Her words carry weight.

Her time has come to an end

Knowing this day would come

Yet never predicting this level of difficulty.

She knows she has reached the nadir of despair.

Her vision should be upward and forward.

 

"The sun knows when she is no longer desired and moves on to where she is needed."

But the pass keeps her looking back.

The past is stained in her heart.

He is stained in her heart and will not be removed so easily.

Author's Note

please be honest;)

Reviews

[Devilish_Light]

I like it. I understand the feeling everyone comes to a point in their life when they are forced to feel this way. Very Good Job!

[Day Dreamer]

I truly loved this poem. Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

I can relate to this. It was beautiful with the right word choice. I loved the picture.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[brenda]

can relate to this !:) love i favorite !:)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I really enjoyed this! a beautiful concept, mixed with the perfect word choice and strong emotion creates something wonderful such as this...great work = ]

[deeps]

Loved the last stanza, it spoke to me the most.
This is wonderfrul.

[Hello, Goodbye]

great imagery and captivating notions..

[Becky C Strukamp]

"The sun knows when she is no longer desired and moves on to where she is needed."

But the pass keeps her looking back.

The pass is stained in her heart.

He is stained in her heart and will not be removed so easily.

I love that stanza. "Keeps her looking back." "stained in her heart not to be removed easily" excellent words to complete this amazing poem. loved it. Another poem lovely poem.

[nevermindfan1991]

This poem was absolutely vivid and beautiful, yet very solemn at the same time. I enjoyed reading this and was able to feel the emotions you were trying to express. Great Job!