Fill my thirst

Fill my thirst

A Poem by Sunya
"

Tell me if the desert asks for a glass of water

"
years have passed,
since life showed its face,
the search for life,
still exploring through space,

soul has passed,
since unfound past,
filling its desires,
bits from the vast,

no gold shines enough,
to fill this thirst,
no woman smiles enough,
to fill this thirst,
no wound has the pain,
to fill this thirst,
no cloud holds the rain,
to fill this thirst.

how long shall the legs run,
to fill this thirst,
how much shall the love burn,
to fill this thirst,

drop by drop,
we satisfy our thirst,
clinging to misery,
we beg for some more drops,

no wine loosens,
this chain of confusion,
of dreams enlivened,
and fears guilt-ridden,

many died before,
filling their thirst,
many left the shore,
after running alot,

death waits for the heart,
still thirsty for more,
life waits for the heart,
that is thirsty no more...

© 2014 Sunya


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This is beautiful Sunya!

I liked every line here....it's so deep, the ending left me in quiet awe.

"death waits for the heart,
still thirsty for more,
life waits for the heart,
that is thirsty no more..." it is brimming with wisdom!

This world is indeed very thirsty...when are we ever gonna quench it?

Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

still waiting for that Frontier :) for the thirst to be no more ;)
Thankyou for reading :)


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Reads to me as never being satisfied, we should live in each moment, and not be looking for the next best thing to quench our thirst and satisfy our hunger. Excellent Sunya.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

You are right Ma'am, we should live in each moment...who knows which moment will this thirst be quen.. read more
This is beautiful Sunya!

I liked every line here....it's so deep, the ending left me in quiet awe.

"death waits for the heart,
still thirsty for more,
life waits for the heart,
that is thirsty no more..." it is brimming with wisdom!

This world is indeed very thirsty...when are we ever gonna quench it?

Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

still waiting for that Frontier :) for the thirst to be no more ;)
Thankyou for reading :)
yep, this poem sure was thirsty.... wheeeew... nice ending for sure!! wow... that is a poem in itself... powerful...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

7 Years Ago

always a pleasure:)
AprilRN1210

7 Years Ago

and ditto.. nice to "see" you as well.. :P
Sunya

7 Years Ago

no no the pleasure is alll mine :p :D hearing your sweet words is like music to my ears ;) hehe

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Kathmandu, Lalitpur, Nepal



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