Without You...

With You, It's true...

Without you 

mirror doesn't reflect me,

There is no soul in my body,

No pen of mine can write,

No memory of mine is complete.

Every drop of rain striking me

Reminds your touch,

Each melody from waving trees 

Reminds your smiling music.

Every Portrait I sketch reminds

How I miss your magical eyes,

Every tune I play reminds

Your salsa with me.

Every step of mine reminds

Your silly dreams with me,

Every smile of your's 

is a treasure for me.

With you

I can breathe,

I can live,

I smile,

I dance.

Reviews

[Paper]

I love your imagery. Very memorable.

[Surya]

Thank You Paper for your kind visit..And thank you for your words am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Krutika]

The melancholy behind yet treasured memories and how they bring you to life is beautifully conveyed.
Well written :)

[Surya]

Thank you Krutika..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Very beautiful.... engaging... so powerful! Omg, your poem is amazing!!

[Surya]

Thank You Mr.Writer..:)

[John F Carver]

I have become a cynic over the tears but this broke the through the watermark and wet my heart.

[Surya]

Ohh!, then it is worthy, Thank you for your words am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Tina H.W.]

Well, this is just downright gorgeous, beautiful, touching, heartfelt, emotional, relatable, and...did I mention gorgeous? It flows so nicely and has such a delicately serene effect on me. I really love this poem! :)

[Surya]

Yeah you said gorgeous, and thanks for that, well a lot actually, Thank you for your visit, am glad you enjoyed, keep visiting..:)

[Tina H.W.]

Likewise Surya :) And it was my pleasure :)

[It Will Change]

nicely written... the beginning itself was awesome the rest was just a gift...thanks for sharing...keep writing.

[Surya]

Thank you for your visit, and words that means a lot...:)

[emmajoy]

' With you I can breathe, I can live, I smile, I dance. '

The emotions that make a person feel complete.
That is love, without it, the day fades..

Beautiful phrases... finely put.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind review and visit..:)

[Ayush Mishra]

Waaooww....Beautifully explained....and Surya Go ahead...I wish :)

[Surya]

Thank you Ayush, hope so, Thanks for your words and visit, keep visiting...:)

[Mamta Sonowal]

Nice, well u rlly explained it beautifully...

[Surya]

Thank you...:)

[Mamta Sonowal]

wella...:)

[Bala Gorthi]

When someone becomes very special , in fact they become our universe, then this is how we feel about them. You have penned it very well, Surya.
We all can relate with such emotions and feelings.
Thank you for sharing..

[Surya]

Thank you for sharing you views, am glad you enjoyed...

[Paul]

I can feel the emotion in each line of this beautiful poem. As well as relatable to past loves of mine. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you well am glad you enjoyed, thank you for your visit...:)