Without You...

With You, It's true...

Without you 

mirror doesn't reflect me,

There is no soul in my body,

No pen of mine can write,

No memory of mine is complete.

Every drop of rain striking me

Reminds your touch,

Each melody from waving trees 

Reminds your smiling music.

Every Portrait I sketch reminds

How I miss your magical eyes,

Every tune I play reminds

Your salsa with me.

Every step of mine reminds

Your silly dreams with me,

Every smile of your's 

is a treasure for me.

With you

I can breathe,

I can live,

I smile,

I dance.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I have no words to say how beautifully this is written. It clearly shows that you long for her presence and being away from her makes you feel restless. I truly liked it.

[Surya]

Haha, atleast you understood me am glad for that.....Thank you fotlr your warm words...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Quite an amazing piece of romantic work Surya, I love to read your works...
Specially the list line is gonna touch everyone's heart.

[Surya]

Ohho, Thank you Farhan for your words and am glad you enjoyed, Thank you for your visit...:)

[wordman]

what kind of life would it be,
if there we`re no you and me..

touching write

[Surya]

Haha, I wish that happens....
Thank you for your Visit...:)