Without You...

With You, It's true...

Without you 

mirror doesn't reflect me,

There is no soul in my body,

No pen of mine can write,

No memory of mine is complete.

Every drop of rain striking me

Reminds your touch,

Each melody from waving trees 

Reminds your smiling music.

Every Portrait I sketch reminds

How I miss your magical eyes,

Every tune I play reminds

Your salsa with me.

Every step of mine reminds

Your silly dreams with me,

Every smile of your's 

is a treasure for me.

With you

I can breathe,

I can live,

I smile,

I dance.

Reviews

[Taz]

Very well done job here, seems to come straight from the heart. I really appriciate your work. Keep it up!

[Surya]

Thanks for that, and it seems so, Thank you Taz for your kind words and visit...:)

[Taz]

You are welcome.

[Johnny Dep]

Is It So..?...Does it feels the same, Surya all in all you did great job my friend...Keep Sharing..

[Surya]

Maybe it may differs for people like how you feel, Thank you Johnny..:)

[Ardra]

Surya
Your poetry is utmost beautiful about the loss of someone who you loved a lot....
But some people don't deserve such kind of love...if they don't take the pain to stick with you through thin and thick...:) keep writing

[Surya]

Thank you Ria for your kind visit and yeah some people do not deserve it....Thank you for your gracious words..:)

[Stacy Purvis]

Sad, melodramatic, disheartening. Loneliness can destroy a beautiful soul. A wonderful read.

[Surya]

That's it, I guess, Thank you friend for your words and visit...:)

[Lana]

So lovely and romantic it also sounds very melodic

[Surya]

Ohh! Thank you Sarah for your kind words and visit, keep visiting...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the thoughts leading to the perfect ending.
"With you
I can breathe,
I can live,
I smile,
I dance."
I agree with the above lines. Love will make us dance, smile and love life. Thank you Surya for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John for your words that means a lot...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Giulia King]

"I can breathe*" lovely poem.

[Surya]

Ohh, I forgot, typing mistake, Thank you for pointing out, Thanks to you for your visit...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I was reminded of the song 'Sad Song' by Justin Beiber and Selena Gomez after reading this. It carries the same theme. A beautiful write.

"Each melody from waving trees
Reminds your smiling music."
I liked these lines a lot 😊👍

[Surya]

Ohh, Thank you Yumna for your words, am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya! Always a pleasure reading your works 😊

[Manasa.L]

Very touching write. There is no life with love. Very amazing, nice.

[Surya]

Thank you Manasa ji for your kind visit and words...:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Without these line of your I could not breath poetry right now. :) You make me wanna write more as your heart is filled with love for a person.
"Every drop of rain striking me
Reminds your touch," I love this one. This is a good choice of words. Only you could compare the rain strike from somebody's touch. Great imagination. Keep it up!

[Surya]

Haha, well you added some tears to my eyes, Thank you for your every word....but that person testing my patience,...Anyways Thanks a lot for your warm words...:)