Silent Plumage..

I found no answer 
I found no life
I found nothing to chase
I found nothing after my questions

It's empty in and out
Rushing drops from 
Draining eyes, smelt 
Aroma in melting ice

Dead and found 
Even I breathe now.
Not to utter but 
No words, nothing in my mind.

Started a journey 
To find a solaced path.
In my hidden destiny
I found lament gaze and 
A silent plumage that can't fly .

Reviews

[Sofia]

I liked this a lot. It's short and very nice. I really liked the first stanza. Emotions were well portrayed. Keep writing :)

[Surya]

Is it so...Thank you so much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!

[Najam Us Saher]

I like your choice of words you have used here. I can feel your emotions. Truly a very good write.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Mr.Writer]

Such a heartbreaking, emotional and powerful poem Surya!
I was engaged from the start, and had empathy for the person...
the way you ended it by saying he/she couldn't fly was really strong and sad...
Well done, keep it up!

[Surya]

Haa, Than you Shaan...am glad for your words...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Surya! :)

[pragya gaur]

As usual awesome one surya Ji..I loved it like always

[Surya]

Thank you tons Pragya...:)