Loves Sweet Tendrils

Loves Sweet Tendrils

A Poem by Aurora Dawn

Distance is so bitter,
You think it as none.
The love so sweet,
It never is done.

For neither a vast void,
Nor a wide trench,
Could keep it at bay.
The loves sweet tendrils,
Lasts Day by Day.

© 2012 Aurora Dawn


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Powerful! I really like the delivery of this poem, very well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this! Its magnificent and beautifully written! You are such a great writer!

Posted 7 Years Ago


i relate to this...having had many long distance relationships...and being in one now...

it is a day to day thing...can the tendrils hold us? good question...

title should be "Love's Sweet Tendrils"

absence does make the heart grow fonder...but i think long distance works well if there is constant contact.

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it all... don't change it! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great write. I love how you tie the strings of words together perfectly! Brilliant write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I'd say, it was nice to see the never breaking bonds of love be compared to the ever growing tendrils for whom, no distance to grow, or crawl is too great, though slow and steady! Nice write!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2012
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Tags: Love, sweet, distance, tendrils, void, bitter

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Aurora Dawn
Aurora Dawn

Boise, ID



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Hi. I'm Aurora. I just kinda write about anything at any time. If I have an idea I write it down and soon it blossoms. I like writing poetry and short stories mainly. Veni. Vidi. Vici. more..

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