Love Rebel

Love Rebel

I can still remember your smell
How could this happen, how could we say farewell?
Sleeping in the fires of our own made hell
Was it you or someone else I couldn't tell
May angels keep you away from my cell
As now a wolf and heart of a rebel

The past we cant rewrite
But sleep tight tonight
Me in your dream you can invite
But that's the only place if you wont fight
As darker the night as brighter the light
Tomorrow I will be shaded out of your sight

That's how it breaks!
Between the right and my many mistakes
Yes I feel you! It shakes
Dead but something within awakes
Fighting no mater how much it takes
Naked walking into the land of snakes
Heart broken drawing into the sorrow of your lakes

I promise I wont beg nor cry
In joy and sorrow we sing goodbye!
If you only knew that love heaven could buy
But for you rebel songs meant out for a lie
Even on the eve of our last words you still deny
And that's how things that grew started to die

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

Again, thanks for the review J. Marc, you can check my more recent ones if you want, you would find a few you would like more I bet....

[J. Marc]

This poem still diffuses the same dose of energy but it is much harder to read than the other poems because of the length of each lines. Very intense though!

[TamerQtaish]

Thanks all for the Reviews :D

[A.r. Bazian]

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no comment!
a masterpiece

[Tali Katzman]

Very strong poem,between wanting and not being able to have it.Love and despair,two very strong emotions.good job

[Katseye]

Oh, babe not again?! So sorry you have more fodder for such a darkly beautiful poem.