Into your Mirage

Into your Mirage

I refuse to bow down
The pressure won't make me drown
Even you couldn't turn my flesh into brown

With a firing rage never asleep
Stick a knife, bullets only skin-deep
Why would I pray for a wolf between the sheep?

Into my mind no one can hack
You will never hold the wind in a sack
Could you ever see a crow in the black?

Now I charge
Into your mirage

Into the storm I run
Charging until it's won
Burning like a spot of the sun
For this mission needs to be done

Strong never weak
I see where you sneak
I'll make your colors leek
You wont even have a voice to speak

Cowardness you drive
Outnumbered one to five
I am still alive!
But the dead none can revive
So will you survive?
Or will you fall once in my world you dive?

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

Hello J. Marc, wow its been forever, thanks for the review, I have been okey, just busy with life, how have you been?

[J. Marc]

Waow! A lot of energy and rhythm here! I found this poem in my read requests only now. Hope you are doing fine!

[Katseye]

Not bad my friend, but the end of the first stanza could be better. I think ground in place of brown might be better; But as I always say in the end it's your poem, not mine to change.