Free.

"A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature"

Look at the sky,
tell me what you see.

A beautiful land,
so high and free.

Take my hand and follow me,
I'll take you to the endless sea.

The winds and waves crash endlessly,
upon the land that meets the sea.

I'll take you in my arms so carefully,
And with one kiss we will be free.
 



"to stop speech when words become superfluous."
~Ingrid Bergman

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This brings me to a magical place Res. It's really sweet and inviting.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review
~Your friend Res

[icelandicblue]

You are very welcome Res.

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice write...Really enjoyable...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Terohime]

Thanks for the Review
~Your friend Res

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.
~ Your friend Sami

[s y e]

I love how you put a quote in your write as well, it was really sweet. It was an intriguing, interesting write. Nicely done.

One thing, maybe change the word 'sea' don't use it as much.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review
~Your friend Res

[unsavable_soul]

Simple but very elegant. This brings clear imagery to mind that makes the piece very relatable. This is a feeling and thought we could all try to live within... "love".
Thanks again for this.
Chris

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review.
~Your friend Res

[Frieda P]

It's quite sweet, love what you did with the quote....not so much the repetition of 'sea' though it's redundant, maybe work on one of those.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review
~Your friend Res

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write, Res. Has a divine feel.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review
~Your friend Res

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most intriguing thought, the land above - makes one wonder at will, well done, good read.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review ^^
~Your friend Res

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome.