Walk With Me

Walk With Me

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy

 

Walk with me, on summer shores

where the water laps warmly at

our unprotected toes.

 

Walk with me, through green forests,

still dripping with the fragrance

of cleansing rains.

 

Sit with me, on the front porch

where the climbing sun burns the

morning fog from the valley.

 

Sit with me, on the back porch,

where the blaze orange sun

gently bids us good night.

 

Stay with me. Soothe me with your

soft, gentle words and calming

countenance. Love me.

 

 

© 2015 Creepy Swine Guy


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What? Lemme read this again....yup, Dani is right. Where did this soft, gentle soul emerge from? Ahhhh, what soothing words, what tender thoughts. The last line brings it all together. What'd I tell ya bout that love thang? Get's ya every time. Love is good. It's verra good, and you just expressed a wonderful, hidden desire for it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Such a beautiful request in a beautiful way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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How inviting, soft, smooth, romantic, so calming. Wow!! Now this is nice.
oh and the last stanza, ending was perfect!!
I like this one alot G.H.
I now have some beautiful, calming Images playing in my head now. Thank you!
Enjoyed this one

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, wow, this is soft and breezy, romantic and sweet. I like the calm feeling of warmth I get when I read this. Nice job. Beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as often happens, I find my way back to words like these . . . they are still just as beautiful as the first time I read them

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such beautiful expressions! Grand, complicated, flowering expressions will often cloud and obscure true meaning. But the beauty in this poem, was the simple heartfelt words. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...this was so deep....lovely and pure.....gave a very gentle soothing feel...like feeling the smooth silk....
love...so beautiful....and you jus made it sound more beautiful...
loved the read!!! i would give you a 10/10

:) Love,
Krishna

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and gentle poem. Flow and story was excellent. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sheer loveliness...beautiful piece of literature right here. The grace of your pen evokes imagery with ease. Keep scribing poet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're needing someone to look through your very eyes, to see what yousee, feel what you see. The search for that perfect soulmate never ends. Very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Creepy Swine Guy

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