Walk With Me

 

Walk with me, on summer shores

where the water laps warmly at

our unprotected toes.

 

Walk with me, through green forests,

still dripping with the fragrance

of cleansing rains.

 

Sit with me, on the front porch

where the climbing sun burns the

morning fog from the valley.

 

Sit with me, on the back porch,

where the blaze orange sun

gently bids us good night.

 

Stay with me. Soothe me with your

soft, gentle words and calming

countenance. Love me.

 

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

What? Lemme read this again....yup, Dani is right. Where did this soft, gentle soul emerge from? Ahhhh, what soothing words, what tender thoughts. The last line brings it all together. What'd I tell ya bout that love thang? Get's ya every time. Love is good. It's verra good, and you just expressed a wonderful, hidden desire for it. :)

[Vandana Sharma]

Such a beautiful request in a beautiful way.

[?]

How inviting, soft, smooth, romantic, so calming. Wow!! Now this is nice.
oh and the last stanza, ending was perfect!!
I like this one alot G.H.
I now have some beautiful, calming Images playing in my head now. Thank you!
Enjoyed this one

[Doreen]

Oh, wow, this is soft and breezy, romantic and sweet. I like the calm feeling of warmth I get when I read this. Nice job. Beautiful.

[Emily B]

as often happens, I find my way back to words like these . . . they are still just as beautiful as the first time I read them

[la Abeja]

Such beautiful expressions! Grand, complicated, flowering expressions will often cloud and obscure true meaning. But the beauty in this poem, was the simple heartfelt words. Great write!

[poetic soul]

wow...this was so deep....lovely and pure.....gave a very gentle soothing feel...like feeling the smooth silk....
love...so beautiful....and you jus made it sound more beautiful...
loved the read!!! i would give you a 10/10

:) Love,
Krishna

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and gentle poem. Flow and story was excellent. Thank you.
Coyote

[melissa]

wonderful:)

[Starr]

Sheer loveliness...beautiful piece of literature right here. The grace of your pen evokes imagery with ease. Keep scribing poet!

[Heather Rodwell]

You're needing someone to look through your very eyes, to see what yousee, feel what you see. The search for that perfect soulmate never ends. Very good.