The Devils Deal

The Devils Deal

A Poem by SmileBig :)
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Math class poem...lol wrote it in 10 minutes about.

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Drown deep in a depth of lies 
And slounder in doubted sorrows. 
Drink your blood of evil things, 
And slowly and hatefully fade away. 
Leave the darkness to stab our recent wounds 
And make us bleed our purple pity. 
We deserve the death of a life unbled, 
So kill us all in deep sleep forever long. 
Leave us weak and nerved to the bone, 
And choke us with our souls. 
Let us suffer in agony; eternity goes quick 
And never ever let us go. 
Give us battle between the love, 
And make our hearts bleed out. 
Leave to go kill more undead soldiers, 
And come back to haunt our dreams. 
Lift us up just to punch us down, 
And laugh at our everlasting cries. 
With you, and torture close by, 
Our hated souls will never die. 
We shall rule those who share pity of hearts, 
And bleed into a helpful arm. 
We shall hurt and fall, and lie and steal. 
This my friend, is the devils deal. 

© 2012 SmileBig :)


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Can't believe I haven't read this. Eerie and sinister, yet captivating.

Epic job girl!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank u
Quality work, Gothic tones with grey light fading to darkness.

This devils deal poem is the real deal. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Okay, I love dark poetry and this just hit the spot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank uou
"And make us bleed our purple pity." was epic!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks
You are super talented.....speechless

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :D
'And slounder in doubted sorrows'

slounder < < What does that word mean? and from what language is it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow dark yet powerful. I appreciate the message.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

There is a lot of depth and strength in your words
SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank u. I try. Pretty much just try to let my anger and sadness out in my words.
Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

I can sense you really feel what you are writing about. I appreciate that in a poet

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