Only A Matter Of Time

Only A Matter Of Time

A Poem by SmileBig :)
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Just...words coming out of my mind.

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Words bounce around in my head, 
But never come completely to the surface. 
It's like, they exist...but just barely, 
Yet they still haunt my days...even when I'm half alive. 

These words can be thrown when I'm in my deepest state, 
The state of depression where I talk to no one, 
And I do nothing...I sit, like a zombie, waiting to die, 
And then the words come and attack me. I am nothing. 

I wish to the stars and the moon that I wasn't alive, 
These thoughts appear out of thin air it seems, 
And I don't want to deal with the cold anymore! 
This world is so cold, so dark! So...so completely disturbing. 

Perhaps we try along with our everlasting "love" and hearts, 
To live just one more day, and to breath a few thousand breaths. 

But my question is; why does life exist, if we just coast along? 
Why do we have to breathe? Why would we want to? 
It's a dark place here...a cool and mysterious death chamber. 
Yes, a death chamber. For we all die; thus this will be our place of death. 

Death lives within our bodies, and words lie within our minds, 
But once we put them together, it is only a matter of time. 

© 2012 SmileBig :)


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This is very deep... beautifully written... i enjoyed reading it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Japanese Cherry

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome
We all feel this way sometimes... we wonder whats it all for... I know sometimes I feel like its all just passing me by.... but life is worth living... you would be missed for sure...I don't even know you and I would miss you :) Its a really great write.... at least writing helps the soul... I know it does for me !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks
wow i love this.. its so pure.. good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Death is an ultimate part of life but so is love and light and hope and being able to revel in the sure joy of living and seeking love as well. I hope you are able to find that love and that place in your heart where you realize that your life does matter and that every life means something and I think you will find even in the dark you are more loved than you might have expected.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks
Truly thought provoking write... we think the hourglass is always half full not half empty grains filtering to the bottom, but it's only a matter of time. All we can do is live life to the fullest and hope and dream not waste away even though it may seem never ending or dreary or just plain frightening. It may be a dank and completely dark death chamber, but every grave has its angels. Light creates shadows and in the midst of death there's life sometimes. Well penned piece indeed ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Nd true
Castonovia

11 Years Ago

Anytime :P
"Death lives within our bodies, and words lie within our minds,
But once we put them together, it is only a matter of time." this is brilliant, nice work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you
"Death lives within our bodies, and words lie within our minds, But once we put them together, it is only a matter of time." My favorite part.This is an amazing piece of art you have written, I have often wondered the same things.
Well done! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank yoi
Bluefire

11 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
A very moving and powerful poem! Great job! Keep writing. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
What a moving piece. Never let the darkness of the world get to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'll try not to...
TheLordsName,

This piece is intensely moving. I admire you for being able to just blurt out your inner thoughts and doubts; fears and anxiety. I find this very therapeutic.

I believe this assembly of your feelings of the moment could be written into a very good poem. A poem which could be a source of hope and healing for someone.

So I suggest you do a rewrite while reading it aloud and edit it according to your heart's suggestions.

Great job. Promising work. Worth the read.

If you decide to rework it, please ask me to review it.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Sincerely,

Cecil

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thank you

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