1- Write a will

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Once upon a time in a far off land along the coasts of Pearl beach , lived a very large and admirable family , made of 24 members the mother, the father and their 22 children, they were The Rascals.

Now as you know, some recent studies show that people can feel their death as it dawns closer to them, and that’s exactly what Mr. Rascal felt.

He had a very intense feeling, a feeling that shouted, I am going to die soon, so in case he did die he had to finish off some deed he had and these deeds were :
1- Write a will
2-Split the key
3-Pass out the split pieces

He decided to take the challenges, one by one as to finish the matter at hand.
To start off, he is going to approach his lawyer with the intention of writing his will....

"What?? Your will sir, but why? " said the lawyer in utter shock.

"None of us are immortal and I have aged, which means that my death may be close , so it's better to write off a will than sit down doing nothing. "

"As you wish sir, but what do you want to include in your will? "

"Only this: After all my debt, proven with a written paper signed by me ,are paid , the remainder of my money and property is to be donated to charity, except this key" said Mr. Rascal showing off an old rusty key that was once painted golden to the lawyer .

"That’s all sir? "

"yup, that’s all"

"Well then if you may please sign here and here, and down there, and put your fingerprint here. "

After a few signatures here and there,
"This is what you want? " said Mr. Rascal showing off the paper to his lawyer.

"Yes indeed Thank you. "

"No, thank you so much for helping me get done with this quickly "

"your welcome sir, and I hope to see you soon. "

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sira YR]

This is a good skeleton to start with, but I think that you need more detail and a more alluring introduction- something that will draw the readers in and make them want to find out what happens next and I don't really think that "Once upon a time" really accomplishes that. Also you need to watch out for your grammar. For example there is a difference between the word your and the word you're (which is short for you are) so make sure you use the right one when you are writing. Like I said, it's a good skeleton and it has plenty of potential but you need more descriptive and spatial details to make it more intriguing. Thank you for reading what I have to say.

[Truths reflection]

Thank you sooo much for taking time to read and review my writing.
I read both of your reviews , and I will take your comments into my consideration when I do the next draft.
If you really did like this story, there are many others that I wrote and think you are going love
And thanks again for taking time to read my story
Regards
Truths reflection 😊

[Sira YR]

You are very welcome and I most certainly plan on reading more of your stories when I get the chance. :)