Fishing

A sad love poem

 

Fishing

I get stabbed through the stomach

and blood comes, flowing out.

I look at you with sadness in my eyes,

Why would you do this to me?

I loved you with all my heart.

You dunk me underwater

and my lungs burn,

yearning for air.

The water fills my mouth

my eyes start to cloud over.

With my last breath,

I lip the words "I Love You"

I am the bait.....

You are the hook and lure.

Author's Note

Please comment and tell me if i should post more.

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

hahaha ouch

[Sseoni]

Wow! What a great poem! I really liked it! This poem was totally different from what I expected it to be! Wonderful poem! I think you should post more amazing writes! :D