IT

IT

A Poem by UpComesDown
"

everyone has an it

"

As I sit here

       with my bleeding wrists

I stare at wonder

       of how it came to this.

You said you loved me

       I said I did too

but then IT happened

       It seemed IT wasn't true.

I ignored IT

       and just went on.

But then IT happened again

       and IT hurt for so long.

Then the hurt led me

        to my decision

To take the pain out on myself

        as my Love-Hate collision.

But if you ever find out

        First you'll sigh your sigh

Then you'll do IT again

        and I'll want to die.

© 2008 UpComesDown


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wow, such a powerful work of storms, and your words flow straight through, to the readers heart in ways that causes the meaning to linger and subside in the residue of depression's aftermath, and that being pain and loneliness, you have a talented way with form, and I sincerely enjoyed reading this, excellent job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Strong words, I know too many people have gone through this feeling. Great job forming these feeling into a great piece of work. Very relatable piece. Wonderful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I know that feeling, this poem is really good, it's like a heart hitting maelstrom :3 really awesome

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, such a powerful work of storms, and your words flow straight through, to the readers heart in ways that causes the meaning to linger and subside in the residue of depression's aftermath, and that being pain and loneliness, you have a talented way with form, and I sincerely enjoyed reading this, excellent job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem is very good. The reader is able to feel the pain through the words that you have written, and many people can relate to it. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

My "IT"is a total b***h and i love him to death and can't stop.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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"As I sit here

with my bleeding wrists

I stare at wonder

of how it came to this."

i totally feel ya

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The piece flowed very nicely and held a theme that is prevalent in our modern times. I liked how IT was never named but we all could relate to what IT might be and how it has effected each and everyone of us.

Great Ink!

Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like it...it has a sad tone to it...it is a wonderful poem
Great Job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Everyone definitely has an IT. I think a lot of people can relate to this. It's kind of something everyone goes through, at least, once in their life.

IT's a sad fact of life. Thank you for sharing this with me. I am sorry it took me so long to finally read it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Too often have I felt that. The emotion from this poem jumps from the page cathcing the reader in the chest. You have done an excellent job, and I thank you for sharing. If you want to talk, I am always here.

~Arsenic

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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