I Fell For You

A Poem For Jai

Ripping under my skin

Feeling my body

Giving way

I pray

A day with you

Pure bliss

Your soft lips

An angels kiss

Strong arms embrace

My broken frame

Holding me softly

Embracing me through the pain

Your eyes search my soul

Hearts entwined forever more

As you give me comfort

Through this storm

Simple things

Like chicken and mac

watching TV

Having a laugh

 

Priceless moments

I can't ever give back

They sing your voice

In my memory

 

 

Etch your warm brown eyes

In my heart and fantasies

Sending your scent

Into my dreams

 

 

Writing your name

Forever, on this heart

Beating in me

To know you is joy

To be yours is heaven

You show me stars

From a chariot of clouds

 

 

Looking upon the earth

from the sky up above

we fight to give

Each other love

My heart aches

For days to slow

every moment with you

A moment I never want to go

No matter how the world turns

Should I go deaf, dumb, and blind

You will always be here

You've been etched forevermore

 

 

Through my every sense and fiber

By your loving ways

Permeating my soul

 

 

Every memory that is good

Belongs to us,

To now

I am yours

 

And you,

You are mine

To a love so great, no author could ever write its story.

 

Dedicated to "Jai"

Forever in my heart

Ursula Kay Vos 11/3/2011

 

Author's Note

~UKV~

Reviews

[EMF]

You soppy old Romantic you. Absolutley wonderful. A joy to read, that just puts a wam feeling right in my heart on this cold November day. Wonderfully written, the language absolutley perfect and the wordplay sheer sublimity, and I don't care if it's a real word or not, but it is now. Great Work.
But that's what you do.

[Omar Fendri]

You are blessed with an endowment... A blatant love's presented by amorous words, ever so net... ever so harmonious... Silky read.
"Priceless moments
I can't ever give back
They sing your voice
In my memory" BEAUTIFUL ...
Lucky Jai...

[StYleRockZ]

This is awesome...I don't know who z Jai...but I can say that he iz really lucky cuz he gt u...

[johnnyqueer]

This is so refreshing, its nice to see someone write so nicely of love. This is a really sweet poem :)

As love, the pure love that can come together, what does a reader more want than that? This is such a warm and loving write, dedicated to the person who probably is everything to you, it makes the reader happy, and ecstatic. Even though if some peeps can feel itchy to read this, or feel this, "romantic write" I think this is just a pure experience. A voyage of one who may and deserve to feel it. And this write should be appreciated, even though they may not feel this perfect love yet, Giving is always an important aspect. You gave a look at this... Everyone will get the right moment in life, when they will understand this. I think it's more than excellent.

[Boldpen]

Beautiful write...
Filled with love and dedication.
The flow was fantastic and so were expressions.
Truly amazing piece.
Thanks for sharing.