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The Man

The Man

A Poem by Vanessa

 

Lavished, we laze
About the spread out crowds;
The sea of teens ablaze.
Watch that floating in the water,
Fortitude too;
All in the water.
 
Cherish thy world
Live out saccharine existence
In more than existence
But life,
Straying not in the distance.
 
Try hard to perceive this,
Remember your lines.
Now throw out your booklet,
Your worn paradigm.
 
It’s time for removal;
Self-righteous, benign
Medieval or modern.
 
Smoldered greens and melted powders for miles,
Choices and verdicts
No longer your exile.
But it’s time for removal
Of structure and status.
 
Was perception, a reverie
Order, my disdain?
Is contempt a delusion?
And love but a game?
 
 
Dreams are my reality;
Villain to orderly makeup.
 
 
In the light of the day
I’ll sit by the booth
Sipping wine, eating victuals
Throat closed around truth.
 
 
When the line of the streetlights
Is blurred into haze,
I will sip at champagne,
Smoking for days.
 
‘I am he as you are he
As you are me
And we are all together,’ they told us.
So cast regime,
Buildings and light bulbs
Away.
Let’s throw a volcanic ensemble together
And jump to the fields in mindful manner,
Remember your trances
And find your perception-less planet,
For place minus desirable virtue
Gives way to new outlook completely.
A place without pointless view
Gives way to an outlook anew.
 
What have you done?
What is it you’ve said?
Regardless, the limit of new days
Is none.
  
Regardless,
Regardless,
We’ll sit on our porches,
Wooden or plaster,
We’ll sit well on our decks,
Casting out papers and light bulbs and needles,
Climbing to buildings and thrashing them down
The sun, it will guide us
When archetypical patterns consume us
Like they always have.
 
But yielding to be agreeable to our senses
Will modern-day items appear.
If only we’ll touch upon the grassy side of the lot,
Giving way to the sunlight,
The dew drops so dear.
 
Only once we see that life is ‘but a dream within a dream’,
Masked by layers of metals and ores,
That close us in on wanting more,
Of synthetics and symmetry that does ill to truly change,
Of megapixels and coffee cups…
Only when the foggy lenses clear
From our view on the world,
Can we truly say that life is freedom
And consciousness matters,
And spirit is life.
 
Only when lamps are trivial 
And daylight is radiance…
Can we truly say, ‘F**k the man.’

© 2009 Vanessa


Author's Note

Vanessa
this is about the hold on us that 'the man' so strongly has.
'fuck the man' is more than trying to be badass. it's not about going against society or rules, it's most certainly about doing what you think you can, what you think it alright because you believe that you're not harming either yourself or others.

i'll do what i like because i have a right if it's not interfering with the choices of others, because i know what i want to do, what i have to accomplish, and because no one ahs a right to take that away, regardless of 'law' and/or government. equality has nothing to do with age or standpoint regarding authority, and my life journey will not be disrupted by any one.

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You seem to be railing against our superficial nature as humans and society in general here which I like and respect thouroughly.� Really like the 6th verse and then the 7th with,'Dreams are my reality;Villain to orderly makeup.'
This is a nice break in the middle of the piece and really says so much more than meets the eye.
I think we're asking much of the multitudes to hope for a day when 'consciousness matters, And spirit is life.'
Sad as it is, people are taught to value monetarily, value things and physical beauty, as opposed to ideas and true spiritual beauty. 'Life' is valued according to your 'status' in the 'Structure' so to speak. I think I know what you are getting at and really respect your point of view. This one got me thinking and I thank you for that gift.

J.P.O.et

Posted 15 Years Ago


f**k the man!! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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