Until

I knew there was a sun

that adorned the sky each day

Fireflies at twilight

in the forests as they play

 

Daffodils and tulips

found to bloom most every spring

Robins in the sycamore

each morning there to sing

 

Waves upon the ocean

and a moon up in the sky

Stars that brightly twinkle

as the evening passes by

 

I knew there were so many things

yet I could just not see

Until you came into my life

and showed these things to me

Reviews

[Tiana]

Love opens our eyes to see things in a new perspective ... Beautiful!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Island Woman for your nice words.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

This one is just awesome !..starting with a beautiful imaginary and ending with love (for love) . Simply gorgeous ! loved it

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Quite beautiful with great flow. Excellent work

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[R Smith]

a world of poetry just flowed onto the page when you wrote this Will, perfect rhyme and flow, its magnificent :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Richard. I truly appreciate your kind words and friendship

[Confuser]

I loved it and the ending how another power punch. Will, I really enjoy your writing. The last stanza makes me think about life and how things change, how we don't see things right in front of our face; I see the poetic love them in the ending but those two lines are good - in any poem, if that makes sense. Thanks.

[willweb]

It makes sense to me my friend. Thank you so much for your kindness. I believe perhaps we do see for the most part, but the colors become so much more vivid when we are in love.

[Confuser]

Of course you are right; we are "Blinded by the Light." Course I know the words; but they don't make sense. Brings back wonderful memories. Tks Will. Dale

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Each verse flows perfectly. To know someone like that is a gift.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Tim. Most of the time I am only dreaming, but it is nice to dream. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poetry.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

No problem. Dreaming seems to be a way of life for me. :)

[Gee]

You old smoothie.One to get the ladies sighing.Sweet.

[willweb]

Yeah, I doubt that. Seems more like I have them running. :) Thanks my friend.

[Gee]

You need to be that little bit fitter than them then.You're welcome

[MomzillaNC]

You have a real gift for stunning romantic poetry.

[willweb]

Thanks MomZ, I wish everyone thought so

[MomzillaNC]

What? Who doesn't think so?

[willweb]

Nevermind...sorry

[MomzillaNC]

Don't worry about a rare nay-sayer. I've scanned many of the reviews on your posts. From what I've seen, you are almost unilaterally admired for your prowess with a romantic turn of phrase.

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. That makes me smile.

[MomzillaNC]

Just being honest.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

How fluently this reads. Rhythmic Poetry of the best kind. Love this so much. When I read this for the third time, it's like honey on my tongue and music in my ears. I'm gonna share this on Google+, is worth it. Very well done.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Rudi. That is a great honor. I appreciate your kindness

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem.
"I knew there were so many things
yet I could just not see
Until you came into my life
and showed these things to me"
It is amazing how our vision can change when we know happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so much for your kindness. I am glad you liked this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.