Until

I knew there was a sun

that adorned the sky each day

Fireflies at twilight

in the forests as they play

 

Daffodils and tulips

found to bloom most every spring

Robins in the sycamore

each morning there to sing

 

Waves upon the ocean

and a moon up in the sky

Stars that brightly twinkle

as the evening passes by

 

I knew there were so many things

yet I could just not see

Until you came into my life

and showed these things to me

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Love can open one's eyes to all the beauty in the word. I loved the sing songy rhyme and rhythm of this one, Will. So very romantic. Lydi**

[willweb]

I'd love to hear you sing it sometime Lydi. :) Thanks so very much for your kindness.

[Lydia Shutter]

I meant to say "all the beauty in the world"...my fingers are faster than my brain at times. Me, sing? Will, suffice it to say my high school chorus teacher asked me to please just mouth the words! LOL

[willweb]

Now that is funny...I'm gonna remember that one. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

:) good....always smile.

[The Black Warrior]

hahahaha I don't know why I am giggle-ling...okay this is ummm Soo CUTE... a special someone, no matter who that is, opening the eyes of the one who have sight yet blind... < do you understand cuz I felt a little lost there hahaha

This is yet another beautiful poem Will, full of emotion... I just loved it. ugh... I say that too much LOL

Your poems are indeed beautiful Will, and they always have a way to make me smile or cry or giggle LOL

thank you for sharing! :D

[willweb]

Well, let's hope there is more smiling and giggling than there is crying my friend. Thank you so very much for this humbling review of my work. I appreciate your kindness.

[The Black Warrior]

I hope so too my friend LOL ;p I love your works and you already know that LOL hahaha

[Cool Girl]

Beautiful love poem! I love the wording... :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Cool Girl. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving nice comments on my poetry.

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome:) you deserve nice comments:)

[Sami Khalil]

The Until( her coming into your life) has completed you and made you see things and touch things with new fervor and passion. An excellent write, sir...:)............

[willweb]

Thanks so much Sami. It sure does seem that way. Things seem so much more beautiful now. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......

[Matching Socks]

This is beautiful Will. This poem could apply to so many kinds of relationships.
Lovers, friends, a child to a parent. It's very special. It's nice to have people like this in our lives.
You're very lucky!

[willweb]

Yes I am Ana. I am happy this poem reflects the happiness I feel. Thank you so very much for always being so nice to me with your wonderful reviews of my poetry. I truly do appreciate you.