Across melodic skies this night

~

 

Echoes breath of northern fields

where rhythms form as twilights dance

Alone my love does play for you

on mystic strings of found romance

 

Neath weathered winds on sunset views

of amethyst and crimson haze

Fluorescent flows in shimmered light

to harmonize these summer days

 

For hear my love, eurhythmic tones

symphonically our song takes flight

Concertos played of purest sound

across melodic skies this night

 

~

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I can always be sure to find superb poetry when I call on you will. Everything about this poem is class. You remain the King of Romance on this site. Fabulous imagery. Wonderful flow of words.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so much Chris. What a nice thing to say

[nadia dmitri]

Great rhyming! I love the naturalistic symbolism, amazing job :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your kind words

[Arundass TP]

Seems muscical throughout. Beautiful lines 😍

[willweb]

Thanks for reading and commenting

[Cherrie Palmer]

The silent concerto of light always fills my soul with joy. Your painted canvas sings with beauty.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kindness.

[Ken Simm.]

Up here where I live we get the Northern Lights quite often. This is a poetic equivalent.

[willweb]

Thanks Ken. That is a great compliment.

[Soren]

"Echoes breath of northern fields
where rhythms form as twilights dance"
A mesmerizing beginning to this poem of romance setting the scene.
Followed by another wave of beauty
"Neath weathered winds on sunset views
of amethyst and crimson haze"
The visual was followed by the sound in the last stanza. Very nice Will.

[willweb]

Thank you Soren. I always appreciate the kind comments you leave on my work.

[William Michael Reeves]

What was her name, with the Eurythmics? Chrissy Hynde or something like that. She'd like this. I like it. Excellent use of vocabulary. Kind of gave me a Tommy James and the Shondells vibe. Lyrical and just a bit of alliteration that I like.

[William Michael Reeves]

No, that was the Pretenders. Anne Lennox was Eurhythmics. My bad. Interesting that today is national feel the love day, and I decided to read your poetry which is usually full of love. Feel it!!

[willweb]

Now if I had only added a little "Crimson and Clover" it would have been perfect. But you know what they say, "Sweet dreams are made of these" Thanks my friend but to me this poem was just, "Middle of the road" : ) Thanks so much Bill

[willweb]

Ooops, now it is I who has errored...I did add a little crimson, just needed the clover. : )

[William Michael Reeves]

Here's some crystal blue persuasion to keep you in the right vibration ...

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