Making Wishes

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Taking a breath,

beneath heaven’s glowing embers

Calling the moon,

as it passes in the night

Feeling a breeze,

through the branches softly whisper

Dreaming of you,

under stardust glittered light

Kicking a stone,

till it tumbles past the forest

Singing our song,

to the echoes that I hear

Counting the stars,

when I notice one is falling

Walking alone,

making wishes you were here

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Reviews

[June bug]

Ah, such a wonderful write here.
this is very lovely. Nicely written

[willweb]

I appreciate your time and your kindness.

[June bug]

not a problem

[Betty Hermelee]

I love your flow rhyme...it's soft, airy and romantic...and I love falling stars.... yet to make a wish on one
Your word are like floating lilies in a pond....
Luscious!
Warmly, B

[willweb]

Here's hoping you find that star someday and your wish comes true.

[Betty Hermelee]

Maybe I will…. Your poem gives some hope…
Warmly
B.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

This is wonderful, enjoyed the flow of this write

[willweb]

Thanks again for your kindness

[redzone]

nicely penned Will, thanks for sharing...

[willweb]

Thank you sir

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent flowing heartfelt piece. I really love it.

[willweb]

Thank you Ken.

[Chris Shaw]

When the one star that counts is missing. Lovely imagery will. Beautiful poetry.
All the best.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you Chris

[Stu. T.H.]

That's quite cute work, author willweb. Such soothing imagery does help me easing into my lair these days when I am so stuck up with work and social matters. Such imagery... as invoking as always in your poems, the immersion is so very fine indeed. Thank you for sharing your work, author willweb.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much

[Lorry]

This is smooth man, with a capital SMOO! 😊
I don't know about you Will, but I reckon I nailed this review! 😊

[willweb]

I think you are correct my friend...you hammered it all the way home!!! : )