~ Cheesecake

~ Just don't think, and taste...

~ Cheesecake

 

When we were on the coast of Andalucia

In a small picturesque place

Full of colorful windows

And narrow streets…

You let me see a street

Where you have been before

 

I felt happy when the sun shone

And the birds flew,

Even though it was 45 degrees celcius

My skin was red of love

And my cheeks blushed

Only for your touch

 

You took me for tasting

The best cheesecake in town

And I could only think of the pleasure

This feeling in conjunction with your

Gaze while my fork would slip inside my mouth

 

You are a person who gets the worst

In me above, just by the way you look at me

What exactly is good, and I took a sigh, a breath…

As I walked through the alley

With your arms over my shoulders

 

The pure bliss and the fresh lemon taste

Of this cheesecake, made ​​me relieve on a higher

Level, that day ... the aromas of your soul in the cafe

And the taste of this particular cheesecake you picked out

Mint lemon desert, oh it was an pure satisfaction and pleasure

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

This write is about Andalucia, near to the port of Gibraltar, where my roots lay,
And the State of Malaga, is official in history owned by the Morrocan people, so
I feel a bit of both, lol....

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe rememberable heading!! :) Wow Elisa :) you captured this beautifully and presented it vividly,my heart followed your words!! Well written,and fabulous choice words :) wel written abt Andalucia,cheesecake and I felled in your words the presence of your love well written!! :)

Glad I could take you with me for a while to Andalucia :) thanks so much for the many reviews :) knuffels

[Sugar Plum ♥]

So interesting! your poems take me to many places I wish to be! I could go there by my mind every time I read...I loved the taste of cheescake you ate in Andalucia! the travel brings happiness and release you from chains of time...Thank u, dear Eli!
~nia

Yes it is the romantic dreamer in me who adores a bit of escaping into my roots and worlds he he :) big smile to you!! :) will visit yours too soon I hope xx thank you nia

[Corset]

so passionate and sensual, I can almost taste the day you wrote it for, such amazing writes I am reading today, all around, and yours always provide the spice of ambiance and passionate robust, I love that, in people, in poems...I live vicariously through your eyes and you bring me to such exotic lands!
We are so lucky to have you dear one!

Aw, thank you so much for your kind words. Really so happy I could take you for a moment with me... to Andalucia, xo

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

So passionate. I love this piece. Well done. Mr Dunne

Thank you Mr. Dunne, truley appreciated!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love it. This is bliss. I see the color for what it is. Minty, fluorescent. Just like this piece. An excellent story of passion.

Thank you so much :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Love the music and a nice mix with a well pinned poem! As always a pleasure my soul-sister!;)

Thank you dear soul-sis, hope you're ok... I'm missing you! xoxo

[SHEEMA HUQ]

puts you in the mood for a desert even when you are not

ha ha, yes.... on a hot summerday, it tastes so nice! :D no matter how late it is... lol

[Pax]

looks really tasteful. Incredibly romantic.

Thank you Willyam :)

[Distant horizons]

double yum :-)

Yes yummy hehe

[Ed Hart]

i love these beautiful poems of your treasures

Thank you so much dear poet glad you love them

[Antonio Valentino]

awww this piece of writing was as sweet as that lemony slice o cake..

hey hook me up with that chickarita in the vid i wanna sheck out her moraccas.. lol ;)

Hahaha thanks buddy x