~ Ink

~ Ink, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freestyle Poetry, me, Rehab wich can't be a Rehab, Slave of the Pen, a Poetic Junk :D

~ Ink

 

 

Powerful thoughts arising

Surrounded by beauty of nothing

Yet can be influenced in a

Poetic peaceful space

I breathe...

Wander and flying

Thoughts past my face,

As if my mind will be jumping

With such evidence,

Out of nowhere ...

Where is the border?

 

Where you're an artist?

And where you become insane?

How close all lays within,

Those creative brains...?

 

What are the forces

Of struggle

In just a moment of rest

If the writer calls,

The pen dances,

And your heart can not

Do anything then follow...

 

I write out of myself now

Like I did earlier,

It is the ink that is dominant

Colored in red tones

Love has prevailed

The proverbial

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Just to be in my mind, is a maze....
Feel free....

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Pax]

First stanza:
~ ahh, I breathe in the beauty of nothing as our thoughts wonders… our life is poetic form as I perceived it…

Second stanza:
~ again our thoughts are in flight.. jumping out of nowhere… from thoughts to thoughts without borders… if I may say… the mind is a vast dimension like a two mirrors stand together you’ll see infinity all depends on how your think and feel the surroundings …

Third stanza:
~ oh, how those question manifest itself are true beauty of the mind… there is a fine line between an artist and being insane on our work… and that is balance… we can create all types of insane thoughts, words or our craft as long as we hold on into reality.. and that’s balance I think…

Fourth stanza:
~what a wonderful perception , yes at times … but then I always thought the heart dictates what it felt then the mind translate as the pen follows….

“Love has prevailed
The proverbial”
Last stanza:
~ the ink is the result of our life within our soul(when the heart and mind are one)… the love for art had succeeded….

My Dearest Friend, I love this write for its peaks so much of you and the art you are creating… Brilliant as always :)
Your friendly neighbor
w.Pax:)

Beautiful review my sweet friend, how do I love it too see you perceive, receive and creating very good philosophies, just amazing, thank you so much my friend, I keep on reading you over and overb:)

Last word without the "b" I'm on my phone outside x x

[Pax]

oh... your most welcome.... I'm glad you liked it... i did read over and over again to see some errors..:D this piece has some value that creates those thoughts..

You are brilliant my friend :)))

[Pax]

likewise ;) for your brilliant as well...lets fly high :D

Always dear.... With ink and water and oil paint lol xx :) and ecoline....

[Robin]

words , and thought ~ married

And you brought the ring ... very beautiful and symbolic thank you my friend for pausing, and listening.......

[Distant horizons]

When creativity escapes us and roams free, there are no boundaries other than those we put up ourselves, which is why so much writing is constrained in a format the writer thinks of as acceptable. Writing should never follow guidelines, but instead flow to where it is meant to go, like this piece Elisa. Free flowing thoughts guiding you and not the other way around. As ever, hitting the spot perfectly.

Thank you my dear best and beautiful Green Mountain, you always feel me... even in hard times, even in silence.... you're a gem, and real good soul! I thank you for your words, and being you, will WA you tomorrow X :) Great minds alike xxx

[Distant horizons]

And I look forward to being WA'd :-)

Me too :D :D

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

"Powerful thoughts arising
Surrounded by beauty of nothing
Yet can be influenced in a
Poetic peaceful space
I breathe..."

The first stanza sets you up for a beautiful ride of words, lovely.

Thank you so much Rufus, I'm so grateful you loved it. - Elisa

[Rob Santana]

Such a peaceful poem. Beautifully written Elisa.

I thank you dear Creeper :)

[Renée]

I love the dance of mind & pen ! A gentle swirling of thoughts .. ( :

Makes me happier than happy my fellow poetess : ) x

[Renée]

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