~ In my Garden

E.L. Elisa Laura, In my Garden, Piano, Music, Notes, Touch, Peaceful, Quiet

 

~ In my Garden

 

 

In my Garden you rest, 

So beautiful, so quiet,

Dreaming, and sleeping

While your spirit moves,

And dances on winter's notes

I will awake you softly,

By each touch, to let melt

The snow, in your heart,

And awake your body

So we can dance together,

When time passes

On soften sunsets

Each moment anew...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx
:)

Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, so very exquisite are your words this day, so soft and alluring, tempting and timeless. I am a pianist and seeing the black grand in the white snow has gievn my heart a spin, oh how I would love to be sitting there playing among this beautiful winter scene. You poem has touched me deeply, thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.

Thanks a million Jack, :) we should play one time together then... :)
I felt in a musical mood, (when not) actually... glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for stopping by again. I'll be back for your fantastic poetry. :)

[Jack...]

Elisa, I have one song posted here that I wrote the lyrics, music and arrangement for if you'd like to here it. I wrote it for a friend, so i don't sing it, but it is my song. I can send you an rr if you like. It is titled, And here you come.

Yes, ofcourse, thank you, good recommendations, especially from a singer songwriter as you are most welcome! :) I don't do RR's, since I came here, but you can mail me, or put the link here :) Thank you my friend, I shall listen... :)

[Pax]

Your muse inspires you greatly dearest friend...you awake the slumbering soul that dreams of harmonic melodies of winter... a peaceful dream... the soul awakes in your soft whispers... then dance with you in your soulful musical notes of beautiful sunset tunes... warm and bright!
Awesome one dearest friend!

Thank you dear, it is written for my muse yes... :) thank you for diving into it's deeper meaning... you're precious. X

[Pax]

as you are precious too... as your writes as well... its inspiring and very beautiful...and your most welcome...

I feel happy to have you as my friend :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this feels like a forever love poem...spirits dancing together all through life and beyond.

Thank you jacob for being here! :) always appreciated..

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This feels like an awakening of sping's touch... to wake winter with gentle notes of a piano's bliss...

"I will awake you softly,

By each touch, to let melt

The snow, in your heart,

And awake your body

So we can dance together,

When time passes"~Lovely gentle thoughts written beautifully!

Thank you dear, yes, it could be seen in such a eloquent way :) good point... :))) xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Loved the music with the poem...so relaxing!....Thank you for writing it. XXXX

You're most welcome sweetie.... I felt musical lately.... :) XXXX

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I like!

*Dances on winter notes or dances on winter's notes?

Thank you Michael, I appreciate your help :) I shall fix it!

[Tree]

Sensual, and peaceful piece. There is no more restful place than in the arms of someone you love... Well done, E. L

Thankies bro.... for your words, they mean much to me! I'll be back after weekends.... :)

[khalid]

very sweet nice image..i loved the similarity between cold snowy winters and freezing hearts, i loved the way you would move the feelings in the lover as if you are waking somebody up..

Thank you dear, your words give me shivers... of truth.... x be back soon!

[khalid]

my pleasure

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, how I love gardens.. big or small! The image you chose was wondrous, and your sweet words awaken the spring in the soul. xo

Thank you very much dear friend :) xo

[kublakhan27]

The quickest way to my literary heart is through evocations of winter, especially when shared with another...I yearn to lay in this garden and sleep and dream, and wake to the call of a dance...I even detect a small degree of innocence here...thank you for sharing this moment of magic Elisa :)

A little footnote to go with the photo too: it immediately brought this album cover to mind...I just happened to be listening to them so the image was fresh in my mind ;)

http://www.chartstats.com/images/artwork/26377.jpg

My dear friend, and soulmate. Thank you... you have no idea what your review means to me. And that picture is perfect!!!! beautiful ♫ thank you from within my little heart :)

[kublakhan27]

It is your words that inspire my imagination my dear, and your heart is bigger than you give it credit for ;) Glad you liked the picture too :) xox

[J. J. Nightingale]

I play .. well I did long ago
I miss my friend
I miss the voices and the hearts
I sat beside touched and listened to
Well I did, long ago..

This is soft .. and bids me come ...
to break the cold and break the silence
that I so long endured ..

Thank you little dove, for lighting the candle, beneath my old and long cold fingers ..

J. xo

Beautifully said dear Jazz, your words mean much to me, I play always for you in silence too... :) I hope your frozen fingers shall melt, and dance soon the notes of your heart... xxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

forever love ... xo

............ thank you m'lady :) xo

[Ken Simm.]

A sonata of feeling. As ever exqusite and very eloquent.

Thank you very much dear Ken, for your nice words. - Elisa