~ A Thousand Years

~ A Thousand Years, E.L. Elisa Laura, A Thousand Years, Keys, Love, Relationships, Trust, Feelings, Ancient, Me, You, Us, We.

~ A Thousand Years

 

Through the ages,

Your soul embraced me,

 

Where dark nights never

Seemed to finish,

 

The pain in my chest,

And it's infinity,

 

Days we traveled, without effect,

I have seen pain,

            And have slain,

So did you...

 

I have waited, and slept for years,

 

Now the world is barren and desolate,

             I perish with hunger,

 

But beauty arises,

If life exists,

 

Where I hope to find you…

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music: Lyriel - Autumntales

Enjoy the "details"... xx

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful words Lydi, thank you... xx knuffels!

[Tom]

Like the princess who slept for a hundred years until woken by the kiss of a prince !

An enchanting, atmospheric write with lots of dark passion throughout!

Hey Tom! thank you so much for being here, I appreciate it. Elisa

[Tassawwur]

In one word it's beautiful. The hope and longing is so beautifully prominent through the writing. Keep writing.

Thank you with whole my heart Tassawwur, I appreciate you! shall come back for you soon! x

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow, simple, but powerfull!!
I read the review above, vampires uh, I actually imagined an old traveler who toured the world with his/her beloved over the years, but somehow he/she disappeared but now it is evident the emptiness in the heart without that loved person

Wow, Javier, also a wonderful review you give me, with a great interpretation. You make me think of the stories of Jules Verne... (I am a traveler) I mean, not in a caravan, but I am always traveling. Thank you very much for coming by. I appreciate it... and I like the way how you see this one. :)

[Fernando Dardón]

you're welcome! :)
I invite you to keep feeding reader's imagination like this :)

Awe, I feel honored, to have you by!

[Legion]

I like the meandering style here and the message of hope.

Thank you very much Legion! :)

[SkinlessFrank]

not many people can write about love in so convincing a way....dreamlike and penetrating

Thank you very much my friend.... I'm happy to have you by.

[Rossen]

Immortal slave to beauty...
Rich with elegance and wonder. ghostly love

I'm smiling, thank you Rossen...

[Khaled Abu Owaida]

i loved ur words , simple ,easy and convinced .
Great song

Many thanks for reading and your review Khaled! appreciated.

[Khaled Abu Owaida]

i hope i can write like u , but i'm reader type ;) . i have a friend who writes but she is very shy ..

If you listen to your heart, you can write like me :) I'm a reader type too... I now and then share poetry, but if I have the time, I do love reviewing equally or sometimes even more ;) thanks a lot!

[joshua deathdealer]

Immortal love. Enduring through all the pain and deaths. I absolutely love the wording. The infinite pains in your chest. Heartbreaking and breathtaking. Beautiful piece dear Elisa. Your words are amazing..xx

I thank you dearly immortal soul-buddy of me! :) so glad you loved it xx

[joshua deathdealer]

You are welcome. (: Sending love your way xx

Many love and hugs back right at you :) xxx thanks again!

[icelandicblue]

There must be something more beyond this mortal coil. Your poem reminds us of that. It is beautiful because it contains a grain of hope that will turn into a pearl of wisdom.

Thank you my dear friend, your words are a pearl of wisdom itself... beautiful review.