~ Echoes

~ Echoes

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~ To love is to know distance, to love is to set one free...

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~ Echoes


 

 

  The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof

          Where once a spectrum of light

From your presence held home,

             In the darker shimmer, minute by

Minute where the sun settled down, and the trees swayed

                        I silently kept my faith,

                     I loved my sky of

       Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;

  And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom

                   Whooshing against the quay -

          Your voice, echoed a thousand times

                  Where a hundred times you’d  say;

       You’re winged my love, follow me and you

             Will see, where I just hide at day.


 

 

       ~ Elisa Laura                                                 

© 2014


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This speaks in volumes to me...Love echoing across distances was felt instantly while reading this.

I adore how almost every line line is broken. Bringing the love back around, over and over it seems..(I really like this style of formatting.)

The faith being silently kept. ^^ The beautiful night imagery crossing skies and oceans..Then the ending with the truth. Hehe (You are winged dear and so is your poetry.)

Finally the challenge. Follow on. xo


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Wow, thank you for this stunning review, I can tell you, you did really feel it and understand it. (.. read more



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Distance...truly known when measuring love...the less the better...distance ....known again when love ends...the more the better

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Roger for your time and thoughts, very appreciated. Elisa :)
It has mystical tones to the poem very special I like the title "Echoes" a lovely sound in the valley, The Verse-Your Voice Echoed a thousand times-Where a hundred times you'd say-You"re winged my love, follow me and you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you kind sir, for another beautiful review. It's very appreciated. Goodnight from Europe.
Elisa, do not get surprised if i delve in deeper, I love reading you

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Awe, thank you so much sweet woman... :)
I love how you pair each of your pieces with music that illustrates it. Are these the songs you are listening to as you compose your pieces, or are they found later on?

I loved my sky of
Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;
And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom
Whooshing against the quay -

These lines were so full of description and silky smooth to read. Gorgeous.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

7 Years Ago

A dream poet, that sounds fascinating. I never remember my dreams, so it is wonderful to be able to .. read more

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for these words, really that means very much to me. Oh I would love it for you you.. read more
Ashira Macy

7 Years Ago

You are too sweet, thank you! =D I really hope one day I do. In the mean time I will have to rely on.. read more
...You’re winged my love, follow me and you
Will see, where I just hide at day...


This is lovely... It makes me think of how we paint our loved ones across our skies, draw pictures in our minds where they are every universal metaphor... Then, when we miss them, we can see them in the emerald sky, the settling sun, the singing sea, the passing clouds...
An ethereal piece, my dear, of seeing the one we love, in everything...
I enjoyed this so much.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sis, for your wonderful words... You understood it so well, there is indeed love i.. read more
this is the same as a quote I've heard. If you love them let them go if they were meant to be yours they will come back but yes if you love it enough you set it free.



Lovely piece here thank you for this and
your kind review and comment you left on my page.

Blessings. Kindred poet

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear Benita, always a pleasure to read your thoughts. :)
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

7 Years Ago

it's a pleasure my friend. you're quite welcome. blessings. Kindred Poet
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SKY
Wow Masterpeice of work that will always Echo the heart of the readers! Its really aloof and special...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SKY

7 Years Ago

Thanks for being a true friend! Welcome you always :))

7 Years Ago

You too!! the feeling is mutual, and I will come visit more often! :)
SKY

7 Years Ago

Thanks friend!
Such ethereal elegance! A strong voice you have love, and always so sparkling. I find your poetry a refreshing quench...this is so very stunning xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much lovie, I do appreciate it very much coming from you! ♥ I'm really happy you enjo.. read more
Elisa, thank you for showing me support as soon as I joined the cafe, I am touched. Dale has been trying to get me on here for a while now and I finally gave in to him. Hey, it shut him up, haha.

This is truly a beautiful poem and it so speaks volumes to me. It is a poem that I can definitely relate to in more ways than one. Your graphic is gorgeous as is your poem. Well done, beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Haha, you are welcome dear Kayleigh, always, and good he did, for you deserve to be heard. :)
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╰☆╮Wonderful word choices, and this flows so nicely. Beautiful work!╰☆╮

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Brittany for your nice words :) -x-

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