I Silently Weep

Written for all those people that haven't found what they look for in a friend

 

I silently weep for my true friend to appear

To know me,

Understand me,

To love me without fear

I silently weep for my best friend to come

To hold me,

Console me,

And help me with that I've become

I silently weep every night for it to come true

Just a wish,

For some one,

I could say 'I love you too'

 

Author's Note

Nothing very intense. Just the results of 'one of those days'. Makes me want to sigh.

Reviews

[Marcy Simmons]

It does make you want to sigh! It made me wish for an old flame that disappeared out of my life 19 years ago - but I was young and foolish then -- oooohhhh - if i could relive those precious moments...your poem inspired me to think back to those days of foolish loves and romances that help shape us into who we are today! I loved your poem...

[Dearth-15]

I liked this one A lot!

[TheKaylaPup]

*hugs* i wish you the best of luck. nice poem.

[AllyKinzz:)]

i know what thats like. Kinda short. But it has meaning. The title is what caught my attention to it. and when i read it i was like woah, not what i was thinking. But a good woah. :D

Likes :D

[Kitty]

A lovely tribute to those who are still looking for the "perfect" friend. Very sweet!!! Thank you for entering the Thoughts contest. Sorry it has taken so long to read through.

Josie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. We need friends and family to keep us strong.
Coyote

[Sasha]

Whoa!! that is....absolutely brilliantly said. !! so many times I've said this to myself but could never make it into the beautifully flowing poem you managed to transform these feelings into!!

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Intense not, but very emotional maybe, it is beautiful and poignant, sad yet idealistic, what I'm trying to say is that I just loved this writing. Great work.

[Diego]

Short but sweet and tender. The rhyme and meter flow flawlessly through the short stanzas as you illustrate the picture of sadness of someone weeping quietly inside. Lovely poem!

[*Evelen*]

Aww sad, but amazing poem. Good job and keep up the good work!

[AnA]

great poem! short, but full of emotions that I think that many people've been through! i was touched! great job!