Midnight's Race

Midnight's Race

A Poem by XxWhatsername86

With no thoughts on midnights roads 

All these dreams are of the day 

Sun rise, sun shine, sun please fall down 

For my thoughts wish to race

Along the starry skies and the moon filled eyes

Of the ones I cherish most 

Please do not let the light shine down 

On what I truly wish to have or need

A little darkness for you and me 

To lay our heads and dream with those racing thoughts

Oh who am I to fall apart 

So good night my love, my peace, my serenity 

I wish nothing but this race cross the midnight sky

The race to my beloved sanity

© 2013 XxWhatsername86

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deep & emotionally charged. like your style. nice work.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Love it!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

you've got real mystery in your tone. good work, ill be reading more.
read me!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

First off, I love your username. :)

This poem is really colorful (and not just because it's written in purple) and I love the imagery you used. This is really well-written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Why thank you very much!!! ^_^
Really great imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love your poem because honestly I think its Perfect. Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

:) I love the flow of the words. They paint a such a pretty image as until the last word. Good work ^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on January 1, 2013
Last Updated on January 1, 2013
Tags: midnight, dream, sanity, race, sun, thoughts




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