My Letter To Juliet

My Letter To Juliet

A Poem by Young Revelation
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Saw something that triggered this in me, What does it really feel like to grow up with out your Mom or watch her leave you I don't know but this is how this kid feels

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How to love;
This are the words that keeps coming to mind 
It's like a cross puzzle with empty spaces still untraced in my heart 
Am so confused and diffused with so much thoughts on love
Please somebody teach me how to love please have tried 
So many routines from magazines to movies even 
Reality shows to fill this void
Yet i haven't figured out how to love still a spectator
In this topic called love tired of playing the
writers role i wanna be the one to play 
Edward Collin and not Stephenie Meyer anymore for a change
I wanna be a LASER and not a LOSER on this topic called love
I wanna fly to Asia just for the word LOVE swim towards my LOVE even if what's before me
Is an Atlantic Ocean crazy as it sounds am up to the task
I wanna sleep at night with the manifestation of love in my life i wanna be at peace.
Laid on the cold chilly floor i was found myself doing the same old boring routine every night
Trying to picture how love really felt listening to a love song
If only i could grab unto it i said...this saga of never-ending chasing love in my life would end. 
It's just left me one day and never came back home 
since 5 and now am 25 still on the journey of my LOVE
Clubbing became my thing for a while my own way of finding this thing called love 
And everytime i think i might have just found the right one 
I wake up Argh....Damn! 
Same routine again day and night in search of love
All i feel is LUST i need to feel you LOVE!!!
Somebody teach me how to love 

© 2011 Young Revelation


Author's Note

Young Revelation
Please do comment all of them are really appreciated

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@DarkAngel13 thanks so much for your inspiring words! Your words literary made my list of most memorable moments this July THANKS!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I read this, and felt connected. I felt a spark and inspiration. I felt millions of emotions at once. You will go far, and I want to be there when you do! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


@HeartOfStars Thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


An interesting poem, I liked it. Had a nice format and was easy-read. I liked how you put some words in caps lock, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


@Hunter thank you very much! for the encouraging words

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like the poem very much. with some practice you will be a very good poet. good luck and keep on writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks. Would keep that in mind when updating next.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked it. Very passionate. My only suggestion: review your writing a bit before publishing it. I have to do the same thing or else I miss slight typos like the few you had. Nonetheless, good work.
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Young Revelation
Young Revelation

State Of Mind, Thoughts , Nigeria



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