I know it. She knows it. You know?

You know? [M] Based on a conversation I had today.. All wording is practically how the person said it. So.. Yeah. I kinda turned it into a poem.. Well.. Tried to anyway.

She says alotta things about me.

Because I don’t say a lot back.

And I say, she says that.

And she says I say that.

I say she says I say that.

And I say she says that

She says that I say she says

That I say that. ‘Cause that’s what

I say.

And the reason she does this is

Because she benefits from it.

And I know it, she knows it,

And she knows that I know it.

I know she knows that I know,

And I know she knows and

She knows I know that she knows

That I know it. ‘Cause she knows.

You know?

At least that’s what I think,

Because we are so alike.

And I think that, she thinks that.

And she thinks I think that.

I think she thinks that I think that.

And I think she thinks that

She thinks that I think she thinks

That I think that. ‘Cause that’s how

She thinks.

She knows it, I know it,

You know?

‘Cause that’s just how,

We think.

I think it, She thinks it,

You know?

‘Cause that’s just what,

We say.

Say, think, know alike,

You know?

Author's Note

Took me ages to get the syllables on each line to similar values... Had to use enjambment for once! I think it's rather good ;)
Please review it! Don't just view it! :L
[M]

Reviews

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

You worked the form that you chose very well here. I admit I'm kinda tired so hearing all that repetition was a little overwhelming, but I think after a good cup of coffee this would be rather enjoyable. What I really like about this is that it seems like a conversation, maybe someone frazzled.

[Ana_Cristina]

aha THE FINAL PIECE! so much better now that it's finished and shows what you're trying to say... well done a really good write :) x

[deeps]

This is different then to what I usually read.
I like this, Very well written

[Justin Street]

Hey bro, nice. It's a good write, but i have to admit "And I say, she says that.And she says I say that." can get a little tedious, but you know what that's a personal opinion. Again good write. I look forward to seeing more work from you. -Justin

[kayla garcia]

i love it great

[Ana_Cristina]

I like it! A tiny bit confusing sometimes but that's what gives it its uniqueness. well done kasim I would like to see the finished piece so carry on...! :) x