So Pure

So Pure

A Poem by Aekmy

My world is dark, my eyes unseeing. Something arises. This is my favorite scene. The clouds clap, roaring in the sky. Our electricity is cut of by a bigger power. 
Thrilling. Inviting.
And you aren't here. I want to feel the intensity surging through my veins
with 
you
by
my side.
I'd share my feelings with a kiss, give you a taste of this, 
of adrenaline in its purest form: love.

© 2010 Aekmy


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A powerful and passionate poem. The beginning really draw me into reading more. The imagery is very vivid. Brilliant poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


a powerful beauty of an elemental display of gorgeous word strings~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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