DREAMS

Tears flow from heart
Which has been torn  apart

Blood flows from pain
Which never seem to drain

Love flows from feelings 
Which always seem to be hurting 

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again

Reviews

[Wild Willow Blue]

I like the sad-to-uplifting theme going here. Well done.

[Olivia Marie]

I loved the ending which was unexpected. I think that "seems" would have worked better then "seem". I also find it interesting that you stopped using end-rhyme at the middle of the piece. Also the whole piece seems to be couplets strung together. With this poem, it works. I also think that stopping the end rhyme added to it in a way. I do wish you would have changed the line "Which always get hurt" to something different. However it works :) The whole thing is amazing, and hopeful. These are just some nit-picks. I enjoyed reading it!

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

what can i say besides i love it great write loved it!!!!! and again i think you're a terrific writer

[Celestial Witch Child]

In the third couplet, it kind of throws me off because it's the only thing that does not rhyme.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very true. Interesting poem-I like it. Great job!

[Laura Maidah]

Actually, dreams are part of your brain, technically. Have you taken psyche yet? The dreamscape is pretty interesting. And I'm fairly certain you mean "the heart"? Otherwise it's a little uncomfortable. The second and third stanzas blow me to pieces everytime I read it.

[Martha Gilleece]

Very nice words, a lot of truth in them

[Corset]

Just as love seems to never last, pain also is a fleeting deer, it too shall find it's path
back to happiness the only thing we can do about the past is accept it. lovely write :)

[Mockingbird]

shows hope and resilience.