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A Poem by Akash gaikwad
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Thanks to DJ Seinfeild I took his words and modify with mine. This is just true feelings when I see.

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I left me and that destroyed me.
You see I am different each time because I am trying to find me.
You know if this happened to you and if you are reading this
then you will understand how we surround our selves with the universal energy of grief.
I walk in crowd and try to find me.
I freeze the moment and see me in everybody.
I try to move on with this meaning but when the road ends I see you.


© 2018 Akash gaikwad


Author's Note

Akash gaikwad
Feelings override me a lot of times


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Every day we dying and we are born again. Every new born give us something new into our personality. I like you deep thoughts also very unique work with words. I find we not native English speakers we can work with words and expression more freely. Then natives. You know great grammar don't make automicaly great poem. Wekll done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

5 Years Ago

Great grammar don't make automatically great poem. That's an interesting point. Thank you for kind .. read more
Great poem, the person seeking to find the me is the real me breaking out of
thoughts/information gathered over time. the only original thought is to question them.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your interesting review!!
Lovely meaningful piece !

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thanks Abby for reading!! I am glad you liked it!!
it is good to try and find yourself instead of being the person others have made you into.

Each of us is unique, we may share some likeness with others but no one is quite like us..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Always against the wind!! But have came so far in life!! Thanks for your kind winds.
Stella Armour

6 Years Ago

you are very welcome ..
Stella Armour

6 Years Ago

you are very welcome ..
what we seek inside is what we feel on the outside from others, I really enjoyed this poem and could relate

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and for your interesting comment.
I liked the honest journey and the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Life send us to the places of decisions. Thank you Akash for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

It's a great pleasure to read your review!! Thanks for the constructive review!!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
Profound, true and we all do, as you said feel these emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thanks dee for lovely review!! Keeps me inspiring to write more!!

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