There is a girl

  There is a girl somewhere
  inside of me, who still
  gives a damn.

  There is a girl floating
  in my memories who still
  misses you.

  There is a monster living
  in my head that controls
  my thoughts.

  There is a person in front
  of me, reading my heart.

 

Reviews

[Silent Knight]

very nice.

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

The monster is in all of us. :/ an it sucks! But all so sometimes the "girl somewhere inside of me, who still gives a damn." over powers that monster. (: Let that girl shine! c:

[light and ashes]

Very nice and well written.

[compositionc]

Such a short and well written poem.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

Excellent!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow...This work has images that haunt me.
There is a fog that hangs in the air throughout
it all. You write with a ton of passion.

[E.V. Black]

"There is a person in front
of me, reading my heart."

Some of the truest works I think I have ever read in a poem before. I could tell you how deep the pain seems and how much this rocks my soul. This definitely rocks my soul. More so, everything leads perfectly into that one, last stanza. It's a perfect conclusion and it's very true. Very quotable material.
I love it!

[joshua deathdealer]

I'm in love this write!! favorited

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, it's so deep and sad. But at the same time it's strong. I can really relate to this, great job (:

[LeaflessTree]

I like this :[] :)